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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, you put a whole lot of damn effort and 4 reviews? the fuck?
I haven't read tekken yaoi in ages and this is actually something else.....
well I can give it another try I guess........on this pairing that I have mixed feelings for (my fangirl says yes and my cannon for video games says no)
I haven't read tekken yaoi in ages and this is actually something else.....
well I can give it another try I guess........on this pairing that I have mixed feelings for (my fangirl says yes and my cannon for video games says no)
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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(sighing) I guess you're not one of group about issues....on the other hand, I know four serct they care to foucs who's topping one of those. I'll tell you one. You're care only to "power" such as Devil Jin is "power " mean He is dominate over Hwoarang even You didn't writing Devil Jin this but same Jin is still topping.
Actually, I want to see Devil Jin is submissive....no one write do it. Clear, how they care to foucs who's topping. Also, I don't mind Hwoarang/Jin can both bottom and topping. I'm sorry...they are fool to see it. Please forgive me.
Ps: I only read. I'm not part of this. I'm sorry you have not enguoh review. Maybe, you need to add charcther, more charcther devploetment and try write less sex to more action.
(sighing) I guess you're not one of group about issues....on the other hand, I know four serct they care to foucs who's topping one of those. I'll tell you one. You're care only to "power" such as Devil Jin is "power " mean He is dominate over Hwoarang even You didn't writing Devil Jin this but same Jin is still topping.
Actually, I want to see Devil Jin is submissive....no one write do it. Clear, how they care to foucs who's topping. Also, I don't mind Hwoarang/Jin can both bottom and topping. I'm sorry...they are fool to see it. Please forgive me.
Ps: I only read. I'm not part of this. I'm sorry you have not enguoh review. Maybe, you need to add charcther, more charcther devploetment and try write less sex to more action.
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will straight with you.....Your story is very not great I read all because realHwoarang and realJin are very OOC whoa!
RealJin is horny and sex with him all time? Not! RealJin is suppose be same charchter Jin is type: sometime will fight him, calm, and rare angry.
RealHwoarang is willing let him top on all time? Not! RealHwoarang is suppose be same Hwoarang is type: easyly angry, more want fight him and not like him.
I conut four sex you always let Jin is top on Hwoarang but, Zero for Hworang isn't topping. You rather jin over him topping, However, why you hell first put place "Hwoarang/Jin, Jin/Hwoarang"? I thought they will turn....I am wrong. I can't contorl you or demaned you. That your story. Not mine. I'm sorry but, truth.
RealJin is horny and sex with him all time? Not! RealJin is suppose be same charchter Jin is type: sometime will fight him, calm, and rare angry.
RealHwoarang is willing let him top on all time? Not! RealHwoarang is suppose be same Hwoarang is type: easyly angry, more want fight him and not like him.
I conut four sex you always let Jin is top on Hwoarang but, Zero for Hworang isn't topping. You rather jin over him topping, However, why you hell first put place "Hwoarang/Jin, Jin/Hwoarang"? I thought they will turn....I am wrong. I can't contorl you or demaned you. That your story. Not mine. I'm sorry but, truth.