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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't like how you made Fayt gay, actually that whole scene was really OOC, but besides that it's okay.
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i enjoy reading this and i see that you update every sunday? that's great
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just noticed that all your lemons scenes are Albel eating out/then making love to Nel. Are you planning on doing a scene where Nel takes control, like giving Albel a blowjob? I really want to read that too =)
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This has been a wonderful read for me. It really brings back good memories of the game. I enjoyed the character development of Nel tremendously. Thank you for making this pairing beautiful. You've made me remember why I love fanfiction in the first place. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter Myst-san. You done it again! :) And I really liked those Alnel seances! I also liked the character development. :D I'm getting really addicted to this fic! >o<
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September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
best alnel fanfiction i had ever read so far a very good job
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the growth of he relationship between Albel and Nel. The fluffy moments are nice, but this emotional interaction is good too. Well done!
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this. I like how you manage to add sexual tension in every chapter, i really liked the morning scene with albel and Nel because it was very sensual. keep going!!
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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this chapter was so adorable. xD I luv how Nel was trying to escape from Albel. That was funny and kute! xD I also had a huge grin when Albel said he Loved Nel. -^o^- And mostly the part where Albel said, “No matter how much I want and love you, I will always be loyal to my kingdom and I don’t expect you to abandon yours for me. If war should come again and we would have to fight to the death on the battlefield, then I’m prepared to bury you with all the honors of a warrior.” AWWW! -^_^- So kuwaii!!! >.< How is it that I can't even find a mistake while reading this chapter (the whole fic)? You are an amazing, mazing writer Myst-san! Keep up the awesome work! :D
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August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Myst-san~ :D I finally got time to read this chapter! And guess what? It's great I love it. :) I like how Albel and Nel could talk in their dreams and see each other. It's kute! >o< Now they can go skype! Lol. xD Dragon bride tattoo = internet\online chat~