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for For the Prosperity of Aquor

by MDragonspell

person Konoha'sYellowFlash
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really good. I really enjoyed reading it. :D Everyone guessing who's Albel's wife is was funny. Albel and Adray getting along made me smile. :) Great job Myst-san!
person Numa
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Peanut allergy? Nope, never crossed my mind. Never met anyone with that type of allergy anyways. Totally stumped! Although, I am interested to know what would happen if Nel were to end up pregnant. A really cute baby to be sure. Thank you for a good read.
person Numa
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For Chapter 16, my guess would be she is experiencing a fake pregnancy. Its definitely too early to have vomiting. However if the body is going through a fake pregnancy, the symptoms would clump altogether. Lack of period, hormonal imbalance, vomiting, tenderness and perhaps later on even lactation?
person Konoha'sYellowFlash
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Really enjoy reading it. :D I love how Albel is concern about Nel. It's cute. ^o^ I'm going with Nel is pregnant. She's not food poisoned.. she could be poison by a monster and she can't be sick? But she was using the contraceptives that Albel had gotten for her.. but like Albel said if you leave it near the heat for too long than it won't work! D: I'm still going with she's 'pregnant'! I have a feeling the dragon-bride-rune thing is kinda involve in this somehow.. :)
person Konoha'sYellowFlash
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! What a great chapter to read. :D Nel's not pregnant.. is she? :O -stare at Albel- D:<
person MoonAlpocalypse 07
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nel has food poisoning great chapter btw
person K9
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loooooved last Chapt. And was Nel posioned?
person MoonAlpocalypse 07
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
finally have time to read this great fic jealous albel is love
person Konoha'sYellowFlash
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I luv Albel so much! <3 -^o^- He made me giggled a lot through out this chapter. Haha. I luv how he always teases Nel and how she would glare at him. So kute! The part where Cliff kicked him.. I loled so loud that my brother thought I was going crazy. xD Albel is such a jealous boy~ Great chapter Myst-san I enjoy reading it! See ya next chapter~ :D
person Konoha'sYellowFlash
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Albel's fan club! That's funny. Nel's a part of the club too. She just didn't realize it yet. xP I luv the part where she kisses Albel at the end. That was adorable. xD I LOVE these Alnel scenes! Great job again Myst-san. :D