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Great chapter like always Myst-san! So sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. >.< School just started again for me. Dx Anyways, so glad to see Clair again. I missed Elicor II. xD Keep up the amazing work!

Great chapter. I was missing those lemons of yours. xD I don't know what "Seesaw" is going on about. I think you made Nel really in character. Keep up the great work!

Ya ya ya! I actually went and did some Nel research and watched some clips. You are right about Nel and I appreciated your insight. I haven't played the game since it first came out, but I pulled out the old PS2 on Christmas and started in on the game. I love this pairing and you scenes between them are wonderful and awe inspiring. I am learning some things as well, which I hope I can try out :)

I truly dislike your Nel. You write her way too effusive and willing. You may have the ”surface personality” down, but there are serious flaws in the most important aspects of her personality that you alter to make it fit your story. Nel's work is her everything, her entire life, her inspiration and her obsession, it would take more than a simple fling to get her to even think about romance. Not to mention, I seriously doubt that Nel would have sex just to relieve tension. She's definitely not that shallow, nor interested in carnal knowledge to the extent you make her out to be. Something that goes against her countries or comrades would seriously distress her to the point of exasperation, not just a simple ”Oh I feel bad about this”. There was problems with this story from the very beginning, and even as I forced myself to read it a little further never once could I imagine Nel doing or saying anything that you have her do. All in all, I am very disappointed with this unoriginal plot and your merger representation of what is originally, a very dedecated and independent female character.

Great chapter! I love the Albel and Nel moments. It's so adorable. Loled at Sophia attempt to help Nel out. xD Oh, and HAPPY NEW YEAR hope you have a great one! :)

Oh no! I was sad to not see another chapter. I really adore Al/Nel pairing. It is one of the few pairings in a video game I actually adore. I loved reading this. It has taken me a couple of days to make it through all of the chapters, but I have. I must say I am exctied to see whats next. I enjoy the sex scenes immensely as well. There is always something new and delicious to look forward to, which makes me happy. I actually like how Albel has panned our he is very believable. I was a little shocked to see Nel submitting so easily to Albel. I guess I see her as more militant and hard, but I guess I forgot she has emotions. I can't wait to read more I am shocked at how mad I was at the cliffy. BOOOOOO I want more, but enjoy the holidays!

MERRY CHRISTMAS MYST-SAN!!! xD

Woot! Both of them are coming along for the adventure! xD

I liked this chapter. It was great to read. Ooo, Adray founded out. xD Can't wait for the next one~

Aw, Albel is moving forward for Nel! >o< So cute. I laughed when Nel punched Albel. Lalala. ^O^ Can't wait for the next chapter!