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I'd wait forever to read your chapters! your Riku is easy enough to relate to, even if I've never been in a situation like his, and Axel is Effing Hilarious!!! XD keep up the amazing work....

your loyal reader, Manin.

lol, ok so i read this out loud to my boyfriend over the phone, and mind you he is really super straight and he didnt say much but i could tell he was into it and wasw upset when there wasnt any more. lol his exact words were 'well its deffinatly interesting...' lol now im giddy, just allow me to fangirl for a moment... *goes and fangirls in a corner and throws cookies at autuor.*

wonderfulness. As a writer i try to review every story i read because they give me joy, but this isnt hard to think of something to say!!!! lol, totally loved it. i really like your style and i appreciate how hard it is an au fics, or any fics for that matter to not do someone ooc, but you got riku (in my mind) spot on!! (thats tha hardest part for me!) axel is a little off, but it really works for me. great job, and keep up the good work!
---Myself^.~ -------

LOL HaHa!!! Riku wanted that!!! I bet he's pissed at Axel now!!! I believe this is where it all begins!!! Can't wait ta find out what happens next!!!! Update soon!!! :)

wow that story rocked!! i totally loved it! but man....i have 2 say i wish there was just more lol well im not 100% sure if ur gunna post new chapters but if u ever do just email me kk


p.s. did i mention i loved the story? XD

It's pretty good so far. Although the brothers!love is a little cliche, you've done it okay so far. Although Axel is acting like an idiot I love him and I hope that Roxas isn't really dating Namine *makes a face* Hee hee hee. I don't know if your going to make it more dramatic or start towards an ending. I'm excited to see, though, please update. At your own leisure of course... >.>;

:D You don't know how big my smile was when I was reading this. Really big, bigger than Axel's 5-footer, lol. I wanted to laugh, really, but it would be really loud and I would feel crazy afterwards X3 so i opted for smiling. I'm sure you're very funny in real life, but you hold it in and save it for the readers XD And I know that Riku must've really liked thinking 'fuck' along with 'Sora'. Thanks for writing!

‘The Perverted World of Axel’ (TM: Ashley) powns real life!!

Sorry . . . . . I’ve actually been lurking around since . . . somewhere around the prologue. I haven’t said much because . . . .there’s not much to say that hasn’t been said by others.

Sorry! ^.^;;;;

That and, I like giving full critiques . . . which take time and energy that I never seemed to have when a new chapter of this popped up. o.O Odd, no?

Bah, anyway . . . . so far, so good. Please don’t be offended, but I’m approaching this like it’s a ‘Dime Novel’/’Harlequin Romance’ (which is, I think, the literary equivalent of a SoapOpera. ;;>.>). As such, there’s an itty, bitty, current of lightheartedness that seems to flow throughout the story--courtesy of Axel most of the time--that I love. But then I also love how everything keeps getting worse and worse for Riku . . . and the whole fighting how bisexual he is . . . . and the make up . . .

Oh! And I think writing this from Riku’s P.O.V. is insanely wonderful. I adore being inside his head, hearing him damn himself, and blame Axel for his non-heterosexual thoughts. But I also like how Riku and Sora are both slllooooooooowwwlly coming to understand each other. You’re not moving too fast, and I like how this isn’t just blind hate on Riku’s part--as less with Sora. It’s interesting that he can be so rational one minute, then completely emotional the next, then so utterly confused after that.

So yeah, this is a cute little idea, and I really like your humor-filled execution of the story.

But if you don’t have a beta/proofreader, you might want to look into one. (Even if you wait until after you’ve finished the story to do so . . . .

See ya next time!

lol "hanging" out :D can't wait to read that. :3 heh heh, I can get passed the make-up cuz this was such a well awaited chapter. :] I almost thought that it would be one of the parents taking that picture XD Axel's fantasy? geez! seriously, you're hilarious! Poor Riku, you're in denial! of course ur gay! :P thanks for writing!

LJ slash comms, ftw!

Funny chapter~ Riku with eye make-up must be very pretty. ^^