rate_review Reviews

i am about to burst out into a dramatic song about how much i love you. i kid u not! u have the best damn writing! loving the lil parenthesis (kinda distracting too =]) that why i love it. riku shudda bin all, im so ripped i make the hulk jealous! oh yeah riku? YOUR FACE!!!=] so this is a lil thing before the "you know what" ? oh rlyyyy, hahahaha. id give u advice but im not a writer. have u noticed in many stories ppls er, private parts (WHAT??im protecting your virgen minds!!=]) aren't described? at all? ANYWHO, get on with the smut, orgy or anythiing =]]]]]. i wuv u >:)

Yay! Update! Pretty good!! Not sure I'm up for a seme Sora, but it's your story and I'll respect that! And Selphie, that bitch! Poor Riku...and Roxas is scared of Riku! That's funny! lol Can't wait ta see what happens next. Update soon!!!

This story is great.
Characters... Great
You have to get on with the rest, I really need to read more... the story is just really addicting

But Selphie needs to get in some serius hurt... she's a bitch and we don't like bitches...

other than that.. well I just love it

I love this story, so very much. I can't wait for the next chapter, to see exactly how Selphie knew. And Seme Sora is rare, very nice.

By the way, if you really feel that way about people writing in english and not computer-speak, I officially love you because it really bugs me when people do that.

Nothing.. thats just it riku.. NOTHING... >.< How about SUMthing next time.

so lets get a fast update into the boy sex maybe? :]

this is such an awsome story please go on to the boy sex please

Yes, finally!!! XD I was wondering how long it would take for them to finally get together. Here's hoping for sex in the next chapter.

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter

OMG I LOVE U. *superfan* i love sarcasm i love sarcastic ppl n i love being sarcastic. i read all these chapters 2day cus man i jus ...fucking love it. u r my hoho now. its cus i fucking love u and your mad skillz.