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person lukki
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're evil, you know that? You're evil because you got me HOOKED! This is probably the best Riku/Sora fic I have ever read. I love the complete smartass attitude of Riku, and I like the way that you don't fall into the trap of making Riku a weak victimized character like so many others. He actually has a backbone and is a strong character. I think that your versions of Riku and Sora seem the most like real people. Any chance of getting more anytime soon?
person Mo
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you on crack? Is everyone in this story on crack? Everything is way, way, way over the top... and not in the good, quirky way. It's just... asinine.
person Kiyoshi
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I had to reprint the whole story over again because somehow my fist copy of it became lost or stolen or thrown away or...well, I don't really know what happened to it, but I ended up reprinting it becuase it came up missing.

This chapter (Unlucky 13, haha) was, indeed, more serious then most, but it still had that good ole Riku humor that everybody loves *laughs*

Arrrrgh, you certainly are the queen of cliff hangies, aren't cha? I can't wait to find out what happens next...but I guess I'll have to, huh? *laughs again*

Just keep doing what your doing and I'm sure you'll continue to keep the attention of many readers like myself.

Cheers to a good story,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA Kiyo-chan)
person pokezejello
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Riku has to get laid. he can be such a drama queen! its pretty funny though. and where the heck does he get NASA from??? this wasn't very serious at all!! okay maybe jus a tiiiinnny bit! hehe, more sarcasm please!
person soraxrikulover
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jeeusss. you're killing me. xDDDD!!!!! amaazing. you're very talented.
i love how your sora isn't weak and can stand up to riku. it's rare to find that. so many authors make him so horribly seme...i hate it. but your sora has a backbone and can throw things in riku's face as easily as riku can be a bitch to sora. it's what a real relationship is suppose to be like...
I LOVE YOUR AXEL SO MUCH
I WANT TO STEALLLL HIM.

i hope you continue this story. i wanna see how you end it. :]]]
person soraxrikulover
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. i meant 'uke'
haha. yes. im lame. i correct myself.
till next time
person k612
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3 This was just my icing on a perfect day! Thanks for writing! Its always refreshing to read this story because Riku's pov is too hilarious. :D ahahaha, they DO argue like a cliched couple, so funny
person Kiyoshi
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, did I forget to review the last chapter or what? Well, if I did, I just want to say that this is the story I come looking for first everytime I get on AFF. I'm so disappointed that I haven't seen a new chapter in a while, but, like I side, I'm practicing patience for this. And trust me, my friends can tell you that I'm the most impatient person on the planet *sweatdrop*

Meanwhile, I'll just go and read the story again *laugh*

Keeping the boredom at bay with your excellent writing skills,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA Kiyo-can)
person monica
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0: i sad cuz u no update *cryz in little gay monica corner* ; ~ ; ill give u french fries if u update for me 0: *types like an illiteriate fool*
0: i love this story riku acts like a male version of me * ~ * wowzerz
person Kehlin
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great as the rest of the chapter ^_^
Though it seems I've been waiting forever for the next chapter.
I check for the next chapter, I think two or three times every week. lol
Just to let know that I'm still addicted to the story.

Btw. I LOVE Axel in this story ^_^