AFF Fiction Portal
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygod, I am in love with this story. I saw it as Recomended Reading on Lightning Sage's page. I am totally hooked, I love everything about it so far, and couldn't stop reading till I hit the last/latest chapter. I'm definitely looking foward to the nect update!
person Tanisha Willis
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story! I really like how you use sarcasm, and the way you depicted Riku. Don't worry about anyone who flames your story, because I think you're doing a great job! Good grammar is something anyone can be good at, but it takes true talent to be able to tell a good story, and you have that talent!! Please right more soon! I'm really looking forward to your work. :D
person FayeV
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! Poor Riku, poor Sora...that's such a confusing situation 2 be in! In love w/ur brother...i hope they work it out!!!! Oh yeah, which of them is a virgin? Update soon!!!! :D
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
argfgms! Update! I just spent the last two hours reading all these chapters, and I ADORE this story! <3 So, please, you've got to update soon!
person Treiale
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. ._.
No, seriously, that doesn't even begin to cover how much Wow I am Wowing at the moment. I am simply oozing with awe.
This is definitely the most entertaining and capturing fic I've read in a very, very long time.
It is made of love (and sex, but mostly love. Maybe.)
Plz more? :P
Thanks. <3
person Manin
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know the answer to that!! D=;

ha ha wow.....Riku's in a pickle....

for whatever reason I laughed really hard when Axel called Sora's mom a Milf....=D

awsome as always!! =D
person queenaoshi
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! That's not a cool way to end the chapter! Please write more soon.
person x13xlovesx8x
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's awkward. Riku and Sora need to get their hends on straight... and their parents need to break up, so that they can have as much yaoi time as they want. XDDDDD
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: Since you can't see me right now my face is like that....but chinkier and now 12 font side ;D I was really happy when I saw this story updated, but I didn't like that it was a short chapter. But it's ok, I'm just really happy that there's been an update. Sora noo! Stop playing hard to get, cause it'll make me wait more. hahaha- Riku, I'll be your best friend, but the number is pretty long.
person SuicialTreefrog
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol nice last chappei...a little mean and short but istillgood