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schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why you hate it? its a great chap!!! i laughed my ass out reading it!!! but the final was so cute!!! i really liked this chap!!! so you better update soon!!
person FayeV
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL They're so wrong for that! Sora's so smart...and Riku's being nice! What?! About time...can't wait to find out what happens next!!! :)
person SakuraFubuki
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^
I love it
So good, i can't wait for more
the theme is wonderful, makes for a great read.
<3
person k612
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw man! you are so fucking BRILLIANT! This chapter really made me laugh...high spirits? possessed by Axel? cat killing jean & couch ruining fun? seriously, you controlling Riku's thoughts is just laugh my ass off funny :D Having Axel as a conscience would seriously make me a messed up person...but I'd love it :D thanks for writing, can't wait for the next!
person Murasaki
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story.

I feel kinda bad for Riku and Sora.

I hope you update soon and let me know when you do.
person FayeV
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Finally!!! That's what Riku gets! I. Was. Cracking. Up! when Sora punched Riku!!! That was so freaking HILARIOUS and Riku soooo deserved it! And Sora had the upper hand in the fight?!!! What?! That's what I'm talkin' about! That's my baby!!! And yes, I'm pretty sure this won't be the last time they interact. (thank goodness!!! XD) If only they Riku and Sora could see the truth that Axel and Roxas can see...can't wait for them to get it through they're heads!!! Axel and Roxas have the most sense right now, good luck to them getting Riku and Sora to see it... Can't wait ta see what happens next!!! Update soon!!! XP
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow great chap!!!!! im still on shock that riku didnt punched the shit out of axel for betray him like that!!!! haha (goes for popcorn to see the fight) anyways im sorry i couldnt review before but i had a usrgery and today was when my mom aloud me to use the compu again but anyways great story i really love it!!!
person Katie-Kat
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeease update soon~ I really enjoy your story, especially all of Riku's smartass remarks. They amuse me so. :3
person Cave
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I was very relunctant at first given the title, but its good. :D
person k612
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
X3 woah! this chapter made me laugh and gasp so much! lol, brokeback mountain! XDDDD ur so funny! thanks for updating!