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person rach
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter made me laugh my ass off.
I love AkuRoku, so throwing that into this story just made my day.
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Can't wait for the update.
person concerned citizen
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, PLEASE continue with this story. Not only is the writing superb but you've managed to capture my interest in a story that could have turned out very cliched and boring. The comic thought behind each action as well as the situations make for a really great fanfiction, and I would absolutely love to read the entire story.

Please don't stop it now, its starting to get interesting.
person Tsumi
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I take a moment to tell you that I love you?

To be honest, I've been reading this today and doing nothing but smiling! I mean...this is just way too good. And the way you left off the last chapter, all I can say is that you better update soon. I do hope that (despite them being a (possible) side pairing) you do something with Axel/Roxas. They are my favorite pairing.

Anyways, I love how you've written this in Riku's POV. It's very...different from other things I've read. And even if you don't think so, it seems that you have a very good sense of humor. At the very least, you're sarcasm kills me.

I'll be waiting for another update and I'll be following this to the end (though I'm sure that it's soon :[ )
person pokezejello
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol i kno u said chapter 15 sucked but i loved it..... it was the shiznits. i love riku's sarcasm so bad n the way he acts. and i HATE riku in the game...but you just made him so damn funny....i love the way u write *sighs* its just so...adddicting.....damn you.
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD 8D His father!? Now THAT is a surprise. And a great way to end the chapter :3 heh, I love how Riku's pissy attitude is everywhere. Don't have time to write more, but believe me I would, so: Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the...aftermath XD
person Manin
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sora's done it before?????? oh snap!

poor unsuspecting Riku, if they ever get it on, he's not gonna know what to do...
person FayeV
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool update! Update soon!!

p.s. So who's seme in this story would u say?
person Tanisha Willis
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice update! Keep up the good work!! Cant wait to read more.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since my internet could decide to quit at any moment, I'll keep this short. I really like this story. Riku's character is funny. I like sarcasm. Keep up the good work.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3 heehee~ Riku, a virgin? Well, he can hide it very well in my opinion. I think that Sora NOT being a virgin is just oh so hot. And for the second that it took me to read the line of Sora's kiss, I thought that it was a farewell. Until Riku played along. And I'm so happy about that. Oh ya, and it's funny to hear about Axel's position in this and his want to meet other people's families. But then it reminds me of his own ;_; how sad.

Thank you for the update, I hope that you will update again soon 8D Your sense of humor is great. Don't worry, I'm not qualified to be an astronaut either, but there's still the hope of being a scientist and fucking up their mission ;P