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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story, I think Poke^up there pritty much summed everything up. I think this story is turning into one with a lot of flare and work, something I admire in the stories I read. And I assure you, this one is most definatly on my list! Over time I've learned to get over pairing misshaps, or pairings I thought I wouldn't like, suprising to say I am intrigued by Link/Ruto, in my younger days I was like, omg no, go for Malon or something, hell even one of them Gerudo guards, just not her. I find this story opening up my mind to this a little more, even though you haven't brought the little Water Princess in yet.
Can't wait for the next update! Till then, I bid you adu.
Can't wait for the next update! Till then, I bid you adu.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far...I can't wait for you to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's rare for me to review ANY story on AFF.net, since I consider about 80% of them to be lacking in the detail and coherency department and the rest of them not along the interest of my fandoms. That being said, I must say I like your story for two main reasons.
One, it actually shows an Alternative Universe story done right, which is a thing that's rare in and of itself. Two, which goes hand and hand with reason one is that you didn't shove sex in here right off the bat, or at all even. You've gone into lots of depth and detail to support your story and eventually (I'm hoping), leading up to the coupling of Link and Ruto (which you've implied, as Link is wanting a lover like Water). I also find that while I would normally be repulsed by the implied Ganondorf/Link pairing, you bring a spin to it that makes it bearable, if not entertaining, having Ganondorf attracted to the power Link possess and his ambition to break him of it.
However, this story isn't without it's issues. Many a time the story seems to be full of detail and vibrancy, only to fail at other such key points. For example, there was plenty of detail and emotion with Ganondorf thoughts about how he would bring down Link as his bitch, but when it came to the terrifying moment of Nabooru trying to hide her child, all she got was a simple line that only told us what she said, not how she felt nor the way her body was reacting. Then we've got the occasional misspelling or naming error, such as when Link's name is rendered as link and the like. While this is quite a small problem, it still brings some issue to the overall quality of the story.
Regardless, I'm awaiting the next installment of your story and very much interested in how the relationship between Ruto and Link is going to play out, withs such drastic changes from the original storyline. Be sure, I will be reviewing it.
Pokeprof
One, it actually shows an Alternative Universe story done right, which is a thing that's rare in and of itself. Two, which goes hand and hand with reason one is that you didn't shove sex in here right off the bat, or at all even. You've gone into lots of depth and detail to support your story and eventually (I'm hoping), leading up to the coupling of Link and Ruto (which you've implied, as Link is wanting a lover like Water). I also find that while I would normally be repulsed by the implied Ganondorf/Link pairing, you bring a spin to it that makes it bearable, if not entertaining, having Ganondorf attracted to the power Link possess and his ambition to break him of it.
However, this story isn't without it's issues. Many a time the story seems to be full of detail and vibrancy, only to fail at other such key points. For example, there was plenty of detail and emotion with Ganondorf thoughts about how he would bring down Link as his bitch, but when it came to the terrifying moment of Nabooru trying to hide her child, all she got was a simple line that only told us what she said, not how she felt nor the way her body was reacting. Then we've got the occasional misspelling or naming error, such as when Link's name is rendered as link and the like. While this is quite a small problem, it still brings some issue to the overall quality of the story.
Regardless, I'm awaiting the next installment of your story and very much interested in how the relationship between Ruto and Link is going to play out, withs such drastic changes from the original storyline. Be sure, I will be reviewing it.
Pokeprof
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're right, you do suck at summaries. I see niether foot nor fin of Ruto. Even if you suck at summaries, what is the idea with decieving readers? Or have I just been fooled by the way this fic seems to hint at a completely different pairing that I avoid like the plague? In which case, no harm done.