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February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It makes sense on her (Samus Aren)past with the cho.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dont worry, heres a review for you. i am also writing a Metriod fanfic, so i know the feeling of having few reviews. So far, i like this story. its not another stupid sex fic, its an actual story with plot(however vauge) and a decent writer at the helm. all in all, a nice start, and i hope you continue it.
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Although, I'm guessing either you haven't seen the official history of Samus or are choosing to ignore it for the purposes of this fic. Either way, I'm sure it'll be good once you get to the good stuff.
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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my time was wasted
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good work, keep it up!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very inventive creation here, I am definitely enjoying it! Please do write more chapters, I like how you transitioned Samus' status from "Hatchling" to the "Newborn". Please keep writing this piece. While I think some things could be a little more fleshed out (format for instance, needs to be cleaned up a bit) You've got the makings of a really nice background for Samus's childhood here. Way to go, more chapters!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your take on Samus' story. I like how you had Samus having dark skin and hair before being infused with Chozo blood. I like your take a lot.
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, there should be more reviews and views of this :P
The first chapter was masterfully done, and second a 9/10. Everything was perfect except the odd slashing, while I understand its symbolism, it was written a tad oddly, with a bit of build-up to basicly nothing happening to the Chozo... Ah well, blame me for my likes :)
The first chapter was masterfully done, and second a 9/10. Everything was perfect except the odd slashing, while I understand its symbolism, it was written a tad oddly, with a bit of build-up to basicly nothing happening to the Chozo... Ah well, blame me for my likes :)
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story! Really I do! i almost enjoyd this as much as i did when i played metroid prime hunters for the DS! write more please!