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by GMartini

schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE AN EVIL PERSON AND I HATE YOU!!!


...ExceptnotreallyOMFG PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONED THIS STORY!!!
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahhaha! I love Rikus dad! He's freaking INSANE! xD
Great story I hope you make more. *puppy-dog eyes*
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story. The characters are all very well written (Riku's dad is my favorite).
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Riku's father scares me O_O......but i love this, please continue.....GO RIKU!! STEAL SORA BACK!!! ^__^
person K Sakurazawa
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna thank you for writing this story~ It's so brilliantly awesome and I just can't wait for more. T___T
person Mido-chan
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry, and I only read about half of the first chapter, but this is just too funny! My mom really did accuse me of being 'elmo'! I started laughing and she just 'tsk'ed me for being all 'elmo' and asked if I cut myself!
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Just brilliant.

I can't tell you how much this story amuses me, 'specially with Riku's pointed denial of Axel's sexyness. Oh, he will not resist for long, especially with Axel's magic fingers...*insert evil laughter here*

Riku: DO NOT WANT. LOVE IT!! Papa is insane and sick and just this side of "special" ed. Mehe heh.

WRITE ON, MY FRIEND!! WRITE ON AND SHARE YOUR WITTY ARTICULATE SNARKYNESS!!! ^_^
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RIKUUUU!!! YOU FOOL!!! I can't beleive how stupid Riku is!! Gah! Let Kairi have Sora, HAVE SOME AXEL INSTEAD!!!

Well, that's how I feel now, but before I was wanting to strangle mean 'ol dense Sora for being such an insensitive buttface. I have to say that this story is full of so many twists and turns and angst and love and fluff and comedy that I don't even know where to begin the praises! I am in love with this fic and it's snarky characters and plot! And you're the first person EVER to get me to like Selphie. Seriously. I have always hated her, intensely, but I just can't say no to yours. She's fabulous, and if Riku were straight, I'd say he should be with her and her madness...or and Axel/Selphie/Riku sammich. Yessss....Screw Sora! We don't need no stinkin' Sora!...*cry* Yes we do...

Great work, I look forward to more!!
person the Sora who's NOT marrying Kairi
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know how much I am loving this fic right about now???


Update MUCH~desu!!!
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Moooooooorrreeeessss. I've been aching for a good Riku x Sora fic, and the idea of Axel as well makes it super duper yummy. Update soon, yes?