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Ooh, this is picking up nicely. I'm growing to increasingly admire your attention to detail and description, you pace it well, but still manage to really flesh out and convey what each character is thinking, feeling and experiencing, like the part about the straps keeping Ashley's breasts from jiggling, it's one of those entirely legitimate yet obscure details I'd honestly not think of most likely XD. The little perspective shift for the final paragraph made me read it twice, but then I got it, and now I gotta see what it leads to 8).

I really enjoyed how you played Krauser calculating the advantages of cutting the bridge, only to find it was already out. You paced it just right so that it caught me out just as much me, and I appreaciate that deft execution 8). Ashley's dream was nicely erotic, and the way you pitched it meant that even though I didn't think you'd jump into your first legitimate sex scene so suddenly, from a plot point of view, I wasn't sure enough of myself to not wonder, so when it did turn out to be a dream I didn't lose out from my second-guessing nature, thanks for that XD. I was a little surprised by how much time Ashley was able to sleep without any trouble coming after them, but I guess I'll see how things play out, I'm still enjoying this a lot :D.

Aww man, this is getting really cool XD. I'm worried this is going to be a short review, cus everything fits together so well into one neat whole. The way everything flowed was smooth and fluid but interesting, not just run-of-the-mill, but it all came together when those villagers attacked Ashley. You did that part perfectly, she's in the middle of worrying about Krauser being not trustworthy, and then bang, not only does he save her, but also tends to a wound she wouldn't have got if she'd listened to him, now that'll have ramifications XD.

Dude....WTH!?!?This is one of the best Krauser/Ashley fics I've read ...EVER..And its not done yet....*whimpers* Is there gonna be more?

Yay. I'm really happy to read something that sets so much emphasis on the plot-to-smut ratio for the RE universe. I'm not personally too big a fan of either Ashley or Krauser, but you write them very well, and the action is nicely paced. I'm also glad to see someone coming up with their own creatures, because let's face it, the series is ripe for that sort of imaginative work! As long as you keep writing, I'll keep coming back for it. Cheers!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!
More kinky Krashley smut! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
And I like the way the plot is going... but I am wondering if Leon is becoming slightly attracted to Jack... then what will Ash think of this... hehe...
I love you ^___^

Alsome chapter! Poor Leon, being treated as a dangerous science experiment. Thanks for the update!

Leon/Hunnigan? That sounds neat. I wouldn't mind some more info on that though I understand why you don't want to wander off subject in this fic, but maybe you could consider doing a side fic that does go into? That would be awesome ^.^

on another note I like how you're writing Leon so far so I don't have much in the way of pointers ^.^ keep it up!

Wow.I got to say this chapter was difert than the other by alot.Keep up the good work.

Please keep going on this story!