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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed what you've written immensely. A shame you're not continuing your work, wish you the best.
(As a side note due to the recent changes to the site the entire story has become one mass of text, its done the same with all of mine as well. I hope you can find the time to fix this as it would be a shame for others to be turned away from it based on a site update)
(As a side note due to the recent changes to the site the entire story has become one mass of text, its done the same with all of mine as well. I hope you can find the time to fix this as it would be a shame for others to be turned away from it based on a site update)
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story thus far, I hope You'll continue it soon. Concerning the neutral philosophy, I have no opinion one way or another ;)
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this fic?
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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this story?
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon. I've had enough of reading this over and over and over again.
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and would be interesting in a fic like this only for KOTOR II.
The dark sider in that one could: on Telos systematically have sex/rape all of the handmaidens while Atris is in her room (no bond to tell the jedi bitch what's happening) before freeing his companions. On Korriban Vash survives long enough to be raped by the Exile. On Nar Shadda he could rape a few of the Refugees and instead of Mira capturing him he knocks her out and has her taken back to the Ebon Hawk for later. On Dantooine before Azkul kills the director they could rape her. Then on Onderon, nothing the first time around but the second time instead of Vaklu killing the Queen the Exile could use the Force to turn her into a slut that desires nothing more than his cum. And instead of killing Atris he instead systematically destroys her then rapes her.
For the light side it could go like this: Vash is rescued on Korriban and later sexually thanks the Exile. Nar Shadda the mother of the child that you rescue from the Exchange also thanks your character. In the Jedi Enclave ruins the Exile could take various female members of the crew (not Kreia) and fuck them down there. After the battle of Onderon the Queen could take the Exile and some of the females into her chambers for some alone time. And for Atris...lets just say the Exile forgives her and turns her with a good fuck.
I suck at writing lemons otherwise I would take a crack at this myself, but I would like to see something like this.
The dark sider in that one could: on Telos systematically have sex/rape all of the handmaidens while Atris is in her room (no bond to tell the jedi bitch what's happening) before freeing his companions. On Korriban Vash survives long enough to be raped by the Exile. On Nar Shadda he could rape a few of the Refugees and instead of Mira capturing him he knocks her out and has her taken back to the Ebon Hawk for later. On Dantooine before Azkul kills the director they could rape her. Then on Onderon, nothing the first time around but the second time instead of Vaklu killing the Queen the Exile could use the Force to turn her into a slut that desires nothing more than his cum. And instead of killing Atris he instead systematically destroys her then rapes her.
For the light side it could go like this: Vash is rescued on Korriban and later sexually thanks the Exile. Nar Shadda the mother of the child that you rescue from the Exchange also thanks your character. In the Jedi Enclave ruins the Exile could take various female members of the crew (not Kreia) and fuck them down there. After the battle of Onderon the Queen could take the Exile and some of the females into her chambers for some alone time. And for Atris...lets just say the Exile forgives her and turns her with a good fuck.
I suck at writing lemons otherwise I would take a crack at this myself, but I would like to see something like this.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hands down one of the best KOTOR stories out there please keep more coming.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, yes. Yay, yay yay, I am SO glad you've updated again!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good Story! a shame that it hasn't been updated in awhile. I look forward to the next chapter, (Should it ever happen)! ^_^
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best written KOTOR Fanfics (both adult and non adult) that I have read and I can't wait until you post the rest of the chapters. Keep up the quality work.