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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was unbelievable hot. You did good! A bitter sweet ending, but perhaps you could do a sequel where the vampire Lawfer comes to visit her...Although that might end badly for him...T_T
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles at your author's note.* Stories have a way of doing that, taking on a life of their own. Many times I intended for a scene to play out one way, only to have what actually went down on paper as something different from what I intended. Sometimes it's better, sometimes...eh...
And romantic is good!
And romantic is good!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! You captured the pain and terror Lawfer was going through quite nicely. Especially when they wanted to use him for their own pleasure. *shudder*
*giggles at Lawfer referring to his privates as his forbidden area.* That was sexy with her licking his wounds.
*giggles at Lawfer referring to his privates as his forbidden area.* That was sexy with her licking his wounds.