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person DarkSacrifice
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes we enjoyed! and please continue! I want more! please update more!!!
Looveee Saix <3 and flowerboyXD please update soon
person Lefuulei
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN! Cliffhanger to a one-shot!

The language was perfect, the descriptions were precise. Only a few area did my mind find it sketchy with positioning and such. Other than that, I adore this story and I keep rereading it. <3