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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD I am well aware of that Marc, but if he was going to get a good time by a lady, I don't really think he'd mind letting said lady have her way a little, haha.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic. The rules she comes up with are quite genuine and the way she teaches them to Dante is funny as hell. I liked the way you got these two together. But I didn't think that Dante would let himself be dominated so easily.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hetero doesn't suit Dante. Just doesn't. DxV Forever! <3
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its true then, that there exist DMC fanfics without brother-on-brother action. o_o I think my faith in God's been restored.
Good story overall. Why aren't people reviewing this more? And sheesh, Solstice isn't really saying anything substancial, IMO. And they're supposed to be top dog of DMC fics. Psh, my hat. I;m no writin' genius but even I can tell this is a real jewel. Sure, you do need to go back to it and catch up with some weird typos and some odd grammar, but its so scattered about I can tell you actually took time to edit it before you posted.
That's good enough for me. Oh, and nice character. Oh, and cool sex scene. Got me horny >X3
Good story overall. Why aren't people reviewing this more? And sheesh, Solstice isn't really saying anything substancial, IMO. And they're supposed to be top dog of DMC fics. Psh, my hat. I;m no writin' genius but even I can tell this is a real jewel. Sure, you do need to go back to it and catch up with some weird typos and some odd grammar, but its so scattered about I can tell you actually took time to edit it before you posted.
That's good enough for me. Oh, and nice character. Oh, and cool sex scene. Got me horny >X3
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My GOD, a DMC fanfic that's not yaoi! XD;
Ahem, now that's out of my system I can be more proper. I was a little worried when I saw the tag OC, but after reading through the story I'm pleased and happy to see there's people out there who CAN create well-rounded non-Sue characters. I really liked Tess, she's charming and lively and has a nice, very 'real woman' quality to her.
The plot was nice and fun to follow, and I think I agree with the way you portray Dante, obnoxious and stubborn and yet so...so charming, haha. :p Why WAS she not just giving in, I wonder. (j/k) But yeah, I kinda knew it, nobody can resist Dante. I also loved your language use and vocabulary, particularly in the sex scene. Are you a Literature student by any chance? You write like one!
I'm only gonna fuss over some typos I saw here and there, but that's nothing a good editing won't fix, and its nothing that removes from the good quality of the story. Again, great work. This site needs more writers like you! ;) You might even be better than Solstice! *causes a universal gasp of shock*
Ahem, now that's out of my system I can be more proper. I was a little worried when I saw the tag OC, but after reading through the story I'm pleased and happy to see there's people out there who CAN create well-rounded non-Sue characters. I really liked Tess, she's charming and lively and has a nice, very 'real woman' quality to her.
The plot was nice and fun to follow, and I think I agree with the way you portray Dante, obnoxious and stubborn and yet so...so charming, haha. :p Why WAS she not just giving in, I wonder. (j/k) But yeah, I kinda knew it, nobody can resist Dante. I also loved your language use and vocabulary, particularly in the sex scene. Are you a Literature student by any chance? You write like one!
I'm only gonna fuss over some typos I saw here and there, but that's nothing a good editing won't fix, and its nothing that removes from the good quality of the story. Again, great work. This site needs more writers like you! ;) You might even be better than Solstice! *causes a universal gasp of shock*
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My sister made me read this, even though she knows I prefer DantexVergil and OCs put me off overall and I really can't imagine dante paired with a girl.
But...damn, you really DO deliver. If you wrote yaoi I bet I'd be your no. 1 fan. The story's pretty cool and your writing's neat and easy to read. I liked your writing of Dante. He sounds cute. Your OC's better than other sluts I've seen created to be paired with Dante... At least, you made sure to create a setting and establish their past. Most people don't even do that. Anyway, good story over all. Wish you'd do yaoi too. <3 Cheers
But...damn, you really DO deliver. If you wrote yaoi I bet I'd be your no. 1 fan. The story's pretty cool and your writing's neat and easy to read. I liked your writing of Dante. He sounds cute. Your OC's better than other sluts I've seen created to be paired with Dante... At least, you made sure to create a setting and establish their past. Most people don't even do that. Anyway, good story over all. Wish you'd do yaoi too. <3 Cheers
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! I finished it! ^o^ very well done! hehe great job! - I want to go play this game now! *o* lmao >.<0
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol - awesome job so far! ^o^ I'll read the rest and review again, but I wanted to note some thing before I forgot:
She's NOT mary-sue-ish at ALL! @o@ She's awesome and very funny! ^o^ hehe
And these lines made me laugh a LOT in the last few chapters:
"If I was a man, you wouldn't be doing this!" - That was priceless, mde me laugh a lot, especially after our DA convo @o@ lmao
"...I’m an alien cockroach, I killed Dante, skinned him for disguise, locked him in the basement and I plan to carry you off for experiments" he stated mock-seriously. - Now that's the best line EVER! >.<0 lmao I couldn't stop laughing and lost my place and had to find it again because I was laughing so hard! lmao ...hehe alien cockroach... I want one >.<0 lmao I'm a dork a laugh and stupid things, lol >.<0
hehe anyways, nice job - this actually makes me want to try playing Devil may cry @o@ lol *has never played it, thus is a bit confused with who people are, lol* I like Dante already >.<0 lol *goes off to read rest... might have to finish tomorrow, but WILL read the rest, lol*
She's NOT mary-sue-ish at ALL! @o@ She's awesome and very funny! ^o^ hehe
And these lines made me laugh a LOT in the last few chapters:
"If I was a man, you wouldn't be doing this!" - That was priceless, mde me laugh a lot, especially after our DA convo @o@ lmao
"...I’m an alien cockroach, I killed Dante, skinned him for disguise, locked him in the basement and I plan to carry you off for experiments" he stated mock-seriously. - Now that's the best line EVER! >.<0 lmao I couldn't stop laughing and lost my place and had to find it again because I was laughing so hard! lmao ...hehe alien cockroach... I want one >.<0 lmao I'm a dork a laugh and stupid things, lol >.<0
hehe anyways, nice job - this actually makes me want to try playing Devil may cry @o@ lol *has never played it, thus is a bit confused with who people are, lol* I like Dante already >.<0 lol *goes off to read rest... might have to finish tomorrow, but WILL read the rest, lol*
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Awesome fic! The interaction between Tess and Dante is better than anything Capcom can come up with!
One thing I want to point out is....
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NOT ENOUGH SMUT!
X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 X3
One thing I want to point out is....
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NOT ENOUGH SMUT!
X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 X3
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The entire thing was excellent and well written, you rule!!
Honestly though, you did a great job of what could have been very short and unsatisfying. You gave the characters a real personality and threw them into several different emotional situations in which you were able to keep the whole thing convincing within the fantasy world they live in.
Honestly though, you did a great job of what could have been very short and unsatisfying. You gave the characters a real personality and threw them into several different emotional situations in which you were able to keep the whole thing convincing within the fantasy world they live in.