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for Bus Stop

by Hitoshirezu69

person Goki
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I actually cried the fic, it's really...OMG! beautiful!! ToT I loved it! you made my day! thank you for writing such a wonderful thing!
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that made me cry at the very end. I usually stay away from character deaths; too bad I didn't see the warning.

All in all, it was pretty good and fairly entertaining. There are a few mistakes, but not a whole lot. Not enought to really bother me anyways. And I tend to stay away from POV changes as well, so it's saying something when I actually read (or review) one that has a lot of changes in it.

Keep up the good work
Cute but Psycho.
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! -Tear eyes.- That was SO FUCKING HOT! I love Axel! And...until I met you i didn't consider Axel x Sora as a pairing but now, YUSH! -Pose.- But man...that ending bought tears to my eyes. ;A;!! DAMN YOU RIKU BASTARD! -Shakes a fist.- Bastarddddd. At least they got to be together in the end!!