rate_review Reviews

This was kick ass writing!

Well, with a story like this, I think it's not a matter of being more explicit, rather a matter of content and focus, but yeah, enjoyed it still.

A nice Ganon x Zelda, although I won't agree with everything in the story, like Zelda's utter inexperience (has she not even masturbated?), although it goes to explain the progression of the story. The image of Zelda in chains and her dress cut off is sexy, and they're acting in character. Would have wished for him to keep her panties on, however, just brushing them to the side for their copulating, and finishing off with a showy cumshot on her panties, pussy, thighs and stockings. How did it feel for her to have his cum dripping from her, getting cold on her thighs? Ganon is a bit too gentle maybe. Will his evil gradually manifest itself?

Oh, there were a few instances where you had 'site' instead of 'sight'.

Thanks for the feedback. I think I've amended the 'site' and 'sight' instances. As for being more explicit, that's not really my style, but I hope you still enjoyed it.