AFF Fiction Portal
person Maddi_Chan
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you! I had to join the site just to review your story! I just wanted to let you know that you're starting out pretty well. You've done good with giving a back explination so far on the characters but I'm scared because it seems like Sora and Riku may have just slept together because they were drunk. I look forward to reading more, please continue!