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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...from those memories Riku seems more the bastard than Kairi. I hope that's not true! But at least Riku and Sora are feeling the rightness. =) Update soon!!!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude. Don't know what to make of that chapter. I was so ready to hate Kairi, even had a pitchfork and now...I actually almost kinda in an odd way, sorta...feel bad for her. Not by much because it's Riku, but...wow. So...who's the bad guy? Did Riku actually make the bet? Did Larxine or whatever set that all up? Did Kairi intentionally steal Sora? Will I stop being a loser and asking so many questions?
I love the story! Keep writing!!
I love the story! Keep writing!!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, what a fucked up situation. Can't wait to read more ^^.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! Riku and Sora are so stupid fun. And you really could have included the Axel and Roxas caramel scene. Wouldn't have hurt us. Very tasty really. Another great chapter. Please, update soon!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...nothing is "very unique." Something is either unique or it isn't. Please change that part of the summary. It's making the baby Jesus cry.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for a super-fast update!
^_^
Riku's right, though 'Who cares about Kairi!?'
And Axel+Roxas+caramel=DROOLAGE!
XD
Liking it so far, keep it up!
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Riku's right, though 'Who cares about Kairi!?'
And Axel+Roxas+caramel=DROOLAGE!
XD
Liking it so far, keep it up!
^_^
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2:
Oh wow, that was really good, the RikuxSora moments! My only wish is that Sora finds out about Kairi's true nature sooner rather than later. ;) I suspect that she had some sort of plan to separate Riku and Sora before she was even with Sora and if so that makes her one conniving little bitch indeed, lol. Let's hope Riku and his friends can expose her and get Sora to change his mind. After all, Sora still doesn't know that his fate was sealed when he slept with Riku. ;) I hope you update again soon with chapter 3!
Oh wow, that was really good, the RikuxSora moments! My only wish is that Sora finds out about Kairi's true nature sooner rather than later. ;) I suspect that she had some sort of plan to separate Riku and Sora before she was even with Sora and if so that makes her one conniving little bitch indeed, lol. Let's hope Riku and his friends can expose her and get Sora to change his mind. After all, Sora still doesn't know that his fate was sealed when he slept with Riku. ;) I hope you update again soon with chapter 3!
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story looks like it's gonna be so good! You're portraying Kairi perfectly! I feel so sorry for Riku!!! I'm glad he got to act on his feelings without Kairi in the way!!! Ha! Update sooooonnn!!!!
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is F*cking awsome! I love it! you have to update soon! *tries to control you with non-existant mind powers*
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Just...wow...
I really love this set-up.
I truly hope you continue this soon. I'm very interested in seeing where this will end up regarding all of the various relationships that you plan on incorporating into the story.
Great work so far, and thanks for accepting the challenge!
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Just...wow...
I really love this set-up.
I truly hope you continue this soon. I'm very interested in seeing where this will end up regarding all of the various relationships that you plan on incorporating into the story.
Great work so far, and thanks for accepting the challenge!
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