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for The Plagas and the Bees

by anacsadder

schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I'm not really an Ashely fan but that was way smexy
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To me, it’s hard to find a good adult version of Resident Evil. It usually ends up,; she/he tries to resist and say’s “oh what the hell” and she/he takes their clothes off literally in only a couple of sentences when she/he is going to get raped. Those I simply rate a 1 and skip on to the next story. Yours is a perfect example of how the victim should take much resistance and no pleasure in her aggressor actions until he broke her down within a great amount of time. You showed a great example of Krauser’s personality, cruel, cold, arrogant, aggressive and everything that makes up of his self. With little draw backs here and there that threw me off at times, it wasn’t exactly enough for me not to want to write a good review. Also, the cliffhanger was a great tease at the end. Nicely done.
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, the first time I read this fic I was hooked...but I stopped about three quarters of the ways through because I didn't want to see a Krashley ending to the fic...I'm so glad that I finally came back and finished this work XD It's nice to know that it isn't some alt-fic that completely ruins my image of the great game that is RE4
person SO HORNY IT HURTS
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wow wow. That was so hot. Very good stuff. Please, for the love of god, write more Ashley/Krauser fics. You do a fantastic job.

~A fan.
person JustS
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can safely say this is one of the greatest fics I've read on AFF; At times I forgot this was a fan-fiction and not a professional story. The way Ashley's state of mind developed into submitting to Krauser was very convincingly done (a rare thing in N/C fics), a brilliant thoughtful and well-written look into the minds of both characters in that situation. If I would ever liken any story on AFF to a masterpiece, it would be this one. Keep up the good work!
person Chrissy
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!!! XD YOU ROCK! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! Maybe even have some Leon/Krauser smut.
person Crimson Belladonna
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...I can see you did a lovely job on finishing! Your details and characterizations were spot on, setting the dark and erotic tone perfectly. You didn't rush into the sex, but allowed the scene to grow until the lust overflowed. Kudos! And...Tetris porn? Rockin'! I'm so down with that!