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hot. yeah, i totally forgot that priscilla actually won in the main story.....stupid me.

anyway, i still love that thing you do when you work in their backstory and personality quirks DURING the sex and foreplay. so it's sexy AND in character. very much so. in a way that if i wanted to make say, a zelda fic, i wouldn't be able to replace priscilla w/ zelda and submit it. wait, maybe i could but......point is, it's not just in character, but CHARACTER EXCLUSIVE!!

and it's hot.

I actually read this one first. The story was a very nice futa take on Priscilla, and it was lovely to see the idea of Karla used as a chess board passed on, the sexy notion of the scene seems to carry more weight here. While reading the Priscilla chapter in the main story, however, she seemed to be curiously sure about having been impregnated, if that was her purpose. If she wants to carry a child, maybe she should make sure of her pursuit.

I also want to see what happens after the chess game.......*crosses fingers for isadora, since she's so much smexier than priscilla*......and basically.....pretty much everything that other guy said.

great to see you're back at it.

I'd personally like to see the results of that chess game, though I don't really have any preferences on how the scene plays out.

Another scene I'd like to see is Priscilla giving Farina her first penis, causing her to go on something of a rampage, for lack of a better word, among the harem.