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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never noticed that about Priscilla till this chapter. XD But hopefully Serra's lesson has changed that. LOVED this chapter, Serra/Priscilla is hot.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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........hot dayum. short but hey, what the hell. if you pull off what you need to pull off then.....so be it.
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........hot dayum. short but hey, what the hell. if you pull off what you need to pull off then.....so be it.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. That was perfect/
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've only ever seen one other instance of futanari that was actually sexy, and it was a Hot Tails (I think) manga a friend sent me. *_* This is the only other time I've actually found dickgirls hot.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love your stories, not because I find them arousing (yuri generally isn't my thing), but because they're genuinely well-written. I like what you're doing here, with the expansion of various relationships. Towards that end, I'd like to point out one particular sentence that struck me as having the potential to be fleshed out:
"Isadora and Farina were spending quite a lot of time together, talking quietly to one another. Presumably they had both figured out that they had a certain blonde wyvern lord in common."
That came from Chapter 3 of the main story. Some elaboration might be in order.
"Isadora and Farina were spending quite a lot of time together, talking quietly to one another. Presumably they had both figured out that they had a certain blonde wyvern lord in common."
That came from Chapter 3 of the main story. Some elaboration might be in order.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, so w/ the louise chapter- at the end, she speaks of needing something. i'm not one for female body processes, but what is that regular something?
sounds good to me though. i gotta see it. her ellipsi defnitely hint at something fun to read.
but it's all a little depressing isn't it? how the lovebirds have to leave each other. Pent, that stupid old fool.
sounds good to me though. i gotta see it. her ellipsi defnitely hint at something fun to read.
but it's all a little depressing isn't it? how the lovebirds have to leave each other. Pent, that stupid old fool.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAIT!! i'll have one futa or two w/ my louise. preferably? fiora (futa)X louise(norm) X any/everyone else (futa)
maybe farina and fiora could, have an open relationship? or have i forgotten the part where they said they wouldn't >_>
come on, it's a harem.
maybe farina and fiora could, have an open relationship? or have i forgotten the part where they said they wouldn't >_>
come on, it's a harem.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Priscilla really likes the sex-change spell, doesn't she. XD
You're still planning to do Vaida/Serra in the main story, right? When Serra's joined, could you do a chapter of this story with Serra/Priscilla? I've always loved that pairing.
You're still planning to do Vaida/Serra in the main story, right? When Serra's joined, could you do a chapter of this story with Serra/Priscilla? I've always loved that pairing.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'd like to see Isadora win Karla sometime, too.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was rather hoping something like this would come about. :D
Well, I must say I'd love to see anything to do with subby Karla. >.>
(Perhaps I should say something more specific, but I'm tired. I'll say something worthwhile... sometime else).
Well, I must say I'd love to see anything to do with subby Karla. >.>
(Perhaps I should say something more specific, but I'm tired. I'll say something worthwhile... sometime else).