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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*bows in awe* I LOVE this story! As a rabid Marluxia fangirl, pairing him with Xaldin is just plainly hot. I want more! Moar!
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If you're not going to finish this can I have it?
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! you updated this im so happy!! xD i hope Axel gets his wink wink** no they should all fuck. ^o^
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't review stories here very often, but this just demanded it! <3
I'm very fond of your writing style. Easy to read, no annoying mistakes or strange choice of words. You use enough time with describing how things lead to another, not just jump suddenly straight to sex. I loved how you portrayed Xaldin, Marluxia and Luxord, they are nicely in character. :)
Hooray for Xaldin sex-fest! \o/ There just isn't enough Organisation XIII porn that isn't Axel/Roxas..
Chapter 1: Marly was definitely sexy and molestable without being weepy and girlish creature in his frustration. Lovely, lovely blowjob ^^
Chapter 2: This is my favorite! Luxord was truly sex-on-the-legs, I like the idea of that tattoo and piercings all over his body. Has frotting ever been so hot? One always don't have to go all the way to the anal sex to make one's panties wet.. Seems that Xaldin and Luxord are now "friends with benefits" ;)
Chapter 3: Marluxia is some tough guy, taking it up to ass without any preparation.. But now he knows how to calm his mind, there is nothing better than a good orgasm to get rid of stress. And Xaldin got some ass :D
Please write more of these arousing and entertaining stories! I enjoyed enormously. <3
I'm very fond of your writing style. Easy to read, no annoying mistakes or strange choice of words. You use enough time with describing how things lead to another, not just jump suddenly straight to sex. I loved how you portrayed Xaldin, Marluxia and Luxord, they are nicely in character. :)
Hooray for Xaldin sex-fest! \o/ There just isn't enough Organisation XIII porn that isn't Axel/Roxas..
Chapter 1: Marly was definitely sexy and molestable without being weepy and girlish creature in his frustration. Lovely, lovely blowjob ^^
Chapter 2: This is my favorite! Luxord was truly sex-on-the-legs, I like the idea of that tattoo and piercings all over his body. Has frotting ever been so hot? One always don't have to go all the way to the anal sex to make one's panties wet.. Seems that Xaldin and Luxord are now "friends with benefits" ;)
Chapter 3: Marluxia is some tough guy, taking it up to ass without any preparation.. But now he knows how to calm his mind, there is nothing better than a good orgasm to get rid of stress. And Xaldin got some ass :D
Please write more of these arousing and entertaining stories! I enjoyed enormously. <3
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"sex on legs" by the yaoi gods you're awesome! This seriously needs more reviews, I loved how well they seemed to be in character and just... well... all of it ^_^ i hope you write more. your writing is made of mewful goodness
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this keep writing MORE and soon!!!!!!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I've never read a Xaldin Marly stroy before, and I love it!