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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really glad that someone wrote something for this pairing - this is the only one I've been able to find online.
I guess my constructive criticism would be that you could take your time with the writing. You've got a fine voice, and the story would have benifited from a little more time spent with the characters, and a little more detail. (Saucy and otherwise.)
I guess my constructive criticism would be that you could take your time with the writing. You've got a fine voice, and the story would have benifited from a little more time spent with the characters, and a little more detail. (Saucy and otherwise.)
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Very nice, indeed.
First off, I have to say that I totally love and adore your Yangus voice. It's absolutely right, the accent and speech pattern, and more importantly, the thought behind it. He's written as a solid and feeling character, not as simple comic relief, but a well conveying narrator. This makes the story flow wonderfully and while the tone is nice and light, it's very sympathetic and their coupling is actually both sweet and hot.
First off, I have to say that I totally love and adore your Yangus voice. It's absolutely right, the accent and speech pattern, and more importantly, the thought behind it. He's written as a solid and feeling character, not as simple comic relief, but a well conveying narrator. This makes the story flow wonderfully and while the tone is nice and light, it's very sympathetic and their coupling is actually both sweet and hot.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wide grin* Thank you. That was bloody well written!!!