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Wow, I read this on a random whim. From the technical side of things, this is probably one of the best constructed fics I've read. You paint a vivid picture without directly telling us what's graphically going on inside his head. Meaning you give us enough to draw our own lavished images in our head without painting them completely. While I'm not too crazy about the whole Steel Samurai thing, I must admit that it was a great read and certainly made me giggle a few times. The whole concept of him masturbating over a doujinshi breaks my brain in a good way! Kudos to you! Keep up the good work!

I really liked this, it was very well written. My only wish was for Phoenix to join Miles and finally indulge his sexual fantasies about him, he he...maybe next time, hmmm? :)

Totally hilarious and full of win!