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for Man's Best Friend

by Fur

person Orenji
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you are handling this story so far!! Keep up the great writing.
person K.E.Y
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOO, Sticky melty ice cream fight with Axel and Roxas, I'm all up for that XD. This story is so good, i wonder what kind of trouble Axel is going to get himself into next chapter?
person K.E.Y
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know for sure that if a dog that i found on the street suddenly turned into a human, i would definitely be a little freaked out. love the story. cant wait to see how it turns out

cant wait for the next chapter
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So awesome and so cute! I love it all, the concept, the plot, the writing, the wording. It's all perfect. <3 Roxas sooooo much. And Axel is just so cute and puppy-like here. And, I must say, I love how long the chapter is. Hopefully, the other chapters will be as long as this.
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Nice modified story.

Please continue. ^__^
person z32
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I really love this story!!! pretty please! continue it soon, ne? >w
person lshno
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's a new plot device in the Axel/Roxas fandom. It was also the most insanely cute thing I have ever read, at that. And I'm not even a dog person.

However, Axel's character bugged me a little and could use some work. Though I do look forward to any upcoming chapter(s)!
person phz
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you gotta keep writing this xDDD it's hilarious!!!
i have seen that manga before xD secretly from my sis' com hahahaha
oh wow, Axel is totally cuddly! ^^ and Roxas just had his shock of his life xD
i cant wait for the next chapter, i will see you again next time! XD
person L.L. Crush
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha... oh, this is great. I can't wait for you to update this. Brilliant. I think I might look into that Manga you mentioned because this is hella funny and entertaining. Looking forward to your next chapter.
person Orenji
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the begining of your story! I read that manga as well, couldn't stop laughing during it! I like Axel's POV. Keep up the great writing.