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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dunno why, but that was the hottest lemon ever :O (despite being totally vanilla and all that X3). Axel is totally a perv and yet he still has that cute/innocent charm I love! Reeeeally really wish there was more! Akuroku is the best. It's like, repressed+wild, (Roxas being totally oblivious as usual xD).
Hehehe, I wonder how Axel knows the mechanics of human sex? ¬.¬ Hmmmmm. I'm totally loving my inner mind theater right now.
Hehehe, I wonder how Axel knows the mechanics of human sex? ¬.¬ Hmmmmm. I'm totally loving my inner mind theater right now.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD remember me from ff.net?
xD yeah, well, like I said, I'd read this when I got home x3
HOW DAMN!
Was that sex scene detailed and steamy! xD All right Axel, do it ... haha pun...doggy style! >.> sounds so raunchy...anyways...
xD nice job and wow, xD Roxas, you naughty closet perv boy x3
Great job as said before and once more, your word play is freaking awesome =D
xD yeah, well, like I said, I'd read this when I got home x3
HOW DAMN!
Was that sex scene detailed and steamy! xD All right Axel, do it ... haha pun...doggy style! >.> sounds so raunchy...anyways...
xD nice job and wow, xD Roxas, you naughty closet perv boy x3
Great job as said before and once more, your word play is freaking awesome =D
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D'aww... doggie Axel! That was so cute! I really like how you didn't follow the manga story to a tee, but really made the plot your own. Good job!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The other day, I was reading this, and it depressed me so to find that this was your only story posted here. You need to write more so that your fandom can reproduce like rats. :)
This is a lovely story. I'm not usually the kind for sap but even then this story didn't let me go. Very cute. I looked up and read the manga referred; you didn't -completely- copy it. Most of the incidents in this story hadn't happened in the manga. You just copied the basic idea, which isn't one hundred percent plageurism..
Anyway. You write well. Your story was more interesting a read than the actual one. And the third chapter was simply delicious. The idea of Axel as a dog amuses me.
If you wish to talk to me;
AIM: sansamoursho
EMAIL: wine.x.rose@gmail.com
--Sho
This is a lovely story. I'm not usually the kind for sap but even then this story didn't let me go. Very cute. I looked up and read the manga referred; you didn't -completely- copy it. Most of the incidents in this story hadn't happened in the manga. You just copied the basic idea, which isn't one hundred percent plageurism..
Anyway. You write well. Your story was more interesting a read than the actual one. And the third chapter was simply delicious. The idea of Axel as a dog amuses me.
If you wish to talk to me;
AIM: sansamoursho
EMAIL: wine.x.rose@gmail.com
--Sho
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww!!!
That was so cute!
^_^
It's kind of strange though, a couple months ago, before I even joined AFF.net, I bought a Border Collie puppy...and named him Axel.
o_O
I hope you write more stories soon. I love your writing!
That was so cute!
^_^
It's kind of strange though, a couple months ago, before I even joined AFF.net, I bought a Border Collie puppy...and named him Axel.
o_O
I hope you write more stories soon. I love your writing!
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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is so wonderful! Quite OOC in most of it, but hey, it was a great story. I'm a huge dog-fan so this was just ridiculously adorable and everything. I loved the "Tell me I'm the best thing since snickerdoodles!" line the best, even if it doesn't fit Axel at all. I think I may use that someday... <333 Great job :3
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you wrapped it up. The lemon was very hot,and very well done! Hope to read more of your work soon.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! (and freakin hot, please)
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaawwwwwwwwww . . . . .that ending was cute.
This was a nice little adaptation. I hope we see more from you. Particularly original works so I can give full reviews.
Though, strangely, I think Roxas was very In Character, and Axel was only slightly Out Of Character. You handled the development between them well.
Ah, until your next fic, Good Luck!
This was a nice little adaptation. I hope we see more from you. Particularly original works so I can give full reviews.
Though, strangely, I think Roxas was very In Character, and Axel was only slightly Out Of Character. You handled the development between them well.
Ah, until your next fic, Good Luck!
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hawt... this is the... most.. i dunno what to say but this is a great piece!
yay! Roxas finally love Axel! and Axel is forever cute and cuddly, oh he fulfilled his dream! both of them
yay! Roxas finally love Axel! and Axel is forever cute and cuddly, oh he fulfilled his dream! both of them