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October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
By my rod n' tackle, this story was amazing. Poor Hena doesn't get enough love, and Link just isn't attentionate enough a lover, hah! So it goes though, and this story does a lot in correcting that. ;) Extremely well written, erotic enough to make your skin tingle and your breath quicken, and just the right length to work your way to the end - then work yourself to the end, guys and gals. Well written, Streti. Hope to see more from you, possibly even on this pairing? Your style is good enough that I'll probably read most anything you write though; so here's to see more work! Cheers!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will never be able to go the fish hole in that game again without thinking of this story. :)
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. The descriptions werer great. I loved every second of it.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are my favorite adultfanfiction author. End of story.
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Didn't notice much of a difference with this third edition, but either way it's still as good as the other 2 times I've read it! Nice one!
I noticed that you wrote a story for Skies of Arcadia a long while back (Been playing the game recently, love it!) and I plan to write some stories for it myself. Just wondering if you could give a try making a VysexFina lemon or even a VysexFinaxAika one? if you don't have the time to, never mind. I'll be doing some myself!
I noticed that you wrote a story for Skies of Arcadia a long while back (Been playing the game recently, love it!) and I plan to write some stories for it myself. Just wondering if you could give a try making a VysexFina lemon or even a VysexFinaxAika one? if you don't have the time to, never mind. I'll be doing some myself!
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These editions, that I've now started to mark, are usually just minor improvements.
It's been a long time now since I played Skies of Arcadia, and I don't even have the game anymore, so it's not too likely that I will write anything more for it. Who knows, though? A story suggestion always has a chance of coming up in my thoughts when I think of new stories.
It's been a long time now since I played Skies of Arcadia, and I don't even have the game anymore, so it's not too likely that I will write anything more for it. Who knows, though? A story suggestion always has a chance of coming up in my thoughts when I think of new stories.
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was very detailed! Keep on going!
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, you turned this into a complete lemon! Thoroughly enjoyed it, some very good stuff!
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
meh, it had a promising start and then just deteriorated into the usual, predictable drivel which in the end is more repulsive than a turn-on. The only reason I gave this two points was because the spelling was not atrocious.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just because you do not appreciate it does not make it drivel. You fail to specify where and why the story falls down. I'm interested in criticism, but I would like it to have some backing.
As for the others, I'm afraid I may have set up bigger expectations for the story than my planned short continuation.
As for the others, I'm afraid I may have set up bigger expectations for the story than my planned short continuation.