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schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:: takes a beta-cookie ::
i'll be your beta. :)
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see you are still alive and kicking. I had forgotten about this but saw it was updated so I went through and read it all again along with your author note. I feel really bad for Riku. I so want him to just stab Ansem to death. I'm looking forward to your update though.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I seem to always review when people are ready to update (missed this chapter being updated)...

I was totally thinking of Thor as soon as Ansem started talking about toys... and that site. (One minor question though, why did you tell people not to go there unless their an adult when this site is an adult site too?)

Anyway I will now be waiting for your next update...
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...I want a new chappy, but that's just me.
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Impressive. Somehow, the 'education' aspect makes it worse for Riku, because he's hearing how he can't stop himself from enjoying it, and feeling it at the same time. And since we know he was a researcher, maybe he spent a little time researching this. ;) Looking forward to seeing what else happens with them all soon.
person Xendrassk
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Praises be to you Lynn! I absolutly LOVE the way you wrote Ansem-handsome! The way I envisioned him. The erotic man that he is. And my poor babydoll(Riku) for participating in the act of learning sex. I adore you Lynn! Keep up the extraordinary work! ^_^
person Height Deprived
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aye, I'm a lurker. I've been following this story from the first chapter, and despite having no previous experience with reading or writing Ansem/Riku, the thought has crossed my mind more than once. I like your style and your characterisation, and I especially like your long chapters. =D It's well-written and not overly cliche, so I salute you for a job well done. Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gimme story! The quality will be just as good, I'm certain! Story, story, story!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next part and am curious when you plan on updating again.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very good continuation to the story. I liked the faire they went to (I went to one myself a couple of years ago, though I wasn't in costume). I really feel for Riku. I think you're handling it well, all things considered. He's not alone, he has a person he respects who is returning that respect, that can go a long way towards helping someone keep their mental balance. Well done.