rate_review Reviews

Oh wow, I really love your story. I just read all 11 chapters in....like less than 24 hours. I really hope that you continue to write for this story; I really want to know how the story ends.

I loved that Axel is Fenrir. that just totally makes my day. <3

Great story! I really do hope you continue it.

i've been a fan of this story for a long while and just figured i should say how much i've enjoyed it. i love your writing style; it has a good flow and the descriptions are vivid and expressive. i look forward to reading more.

re: your notes [1]-- yes. David bowie did his glam-rock phase in i think the 70's. [2] yes. (i'm kinda a bowie fan. only 23, but yeah.)

re: your need of a beta-- *poke poke* i'm on almost every night. I got crappy hours at work, but i usually sleep in late and can't get to sleep 'till ridicules. yeah, my sleep schedule is whacked. I'm pretty good at catching grammar and spelling. I would be happy to help.

re: general review-- i squee'd when my nifty new firefox add-on said you'd updated. I love it. still not really hooking fenrir to axle, cause i've only found one source saying fenrir had something with fire, but i'm letting it slide under artistic license. it is a lovely picture of an elaborate mind fuck, well, half-way. i'm trying to see where you're going with the org. XIII half, but i'm kinda failing. the bridges between the halves are clearly laid out, and it's well written. it looks like you're giving your self plenty of wiggle room, which is great (the real world can be a real bitch). and i want to see more. lots more. but that's normal. hope to see more soon!

WOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!! WAHOOO!!!!!!!!!! FINALY! Yes you did take too long to update, but I'll forgive you. I didn't know psionics existed in AD&D, and goodie for you and your DM letting you play a Demy. Mine wouldn't have let me, house rules guys are guys, girls are girls ingame. But in a Horror-type setting we're starting to set up, I'm gonna be an Axel cosplayer. -- Think Halloween Town variations of him. ..........Hey, ....Could you send people to Halloween Town? PLeeeaaaasssseeeeeeeeeee????? For me?

Not on my computer so refused to log in. Wonderful chapter, it was good to see that you updated. I look forward to the next, keep up the good work.

Sorry for reviewing twice. Guess I freaked out a little. I notice writers tend to torture Riku, hell, I like reading fics with Riki angst too. But yea, this one is more painful then anything I have read so far. The poor dear! Anyway, I finally finish reading the chapters you have posted. Now to type a proper review. I love Axel x Roxas. Demyx too! They are my 3 favorites in the organization! I love the personalities you gave your characters! King Mickey especially, he's a dear and a good friend, totally what Riku needs! I'm going to miss him once he's separated from Riku. Riku method of copping, how he picture Kairi & Sora instead, is heartbreaking and sweet and while I don't like them together as a threesome, I think I can stand it in this story. I think his reaction to his rape make sense to me and is so him. Ansem while so twisted is so in character, I'm speechless and mad at him. Again I hope he meets with a terrible end! I hope Riku won't be drag down with him though. I look forward to Riku & Roxas interaction and how their fight will play out. I also love your sense of humor.

Holy fuck. I think I'm going to be sick.

I don't mean that as an insult to your fic but just, 'Oh. My. God.' I just came across this fic today and is currently at chp 5. My heart is wrenching for Riku. That he has to go through something so wrong! Ansem is a bad, BAD man. Hell, I can't find words to describe how evil you have made him! For you to be able to write him so twisted is just...wow. I hope he meets with a seriously terrible end! I need to picture Riku stabbing the man a million times over to calm myself down! I'm so totally enthralled by your fic. It's so horridly wrong and yet I just can't stop reading. Something is so wrong with me! I hope these feelings I get over reading your fic is enough of a praise for your writing. Now to calm down and read on...

*SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!* *dances in joy* yay! you updated! ..........axel = Fenrir....... ok, i'll be honest, i would have never seen it. that said, i have something eriely (sp?) similar in mind, in a star trek crossover world. err, dimension. and as for dem being a bard, you do know that in the first few versions of dungeons & dragons that some DMs did not allow bards in their games? the designers of the game made them almost too powerful. *grin*

well, what happens next?

Gods I love this story! I was never really one for AnsemxRiku but I thought 'hey...why not give it a shot....' I'm so glad that I did....you chapters are long a juicy....you have different things going on at once so I can't get bored with just the same old thing constantly....you have great descriptions so one can't get confused to easily while reading. True I spotted a few grammatical things but hey....we all make mistakes sometimes. I just can't wait for the next update and hope to see it soon ^^

Hiya. Just wanted to let u know that I love your story and that I actually always read all the intros and extros and therefore decided to leave you a comment. I usually don't because I'm not the type to have concrit about stories I just like them, so I most often don't have very much to say. Either way I think your story is both believeable and interesting, I can tell that you really put a lot of thought in to what you write. So keep up the good work ;D