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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay for Bastian/Lucia! fav pairing ever
keep it up! (here is a cookie)
keep it up! (here is a cookie)
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, I am aware that Mist and Boyd can support each other. However, this doesn't mean they should. Rolf is the only one for Mist. Aside from that, this chapter was pretty good. If I may suggest a pairing, Sain/Serra.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. You have a bit of a HUGE WALL OF TEXT problem. A few more line breaks wouldn't hurt, especially around the dialogue.
Also, "Disclaimer", in fanfic terms, doesn't mean telling your readers that you won't do yaoi or yuri, it's for stating that you don't own the rights to the game and that you're not making any profit out of your fanfic writing so that hopefully Nintendo and Intelligent Systems don't sue your ass for copyright infringement.
That said...
What would your stance be on Raven/Priscilla?
Also, "Disclaimer", in fanfic terms, doesn't mean telling your readers that you won't do yaoi or yuri, it's for stating that you don't own the rights to the game and that you're not making any profit out of your fanfic writing so that hopefully Nintendo and Intelligent Systems don't sue your ass for copyright infringement.
That said...
What would your stance be on Raven/Priscilla?
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting pairings so far :p any chance to read about some Bastian/Lucia? You'd be my master!