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for Puff-Puff!

by angrywhiteboy43

person Simon Frasier
schedule December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Someone please continue this story... or at least RP a Dragon quest Witch with me...
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really great. Very descriptive writing and it was totally hot. Good stuff. If there is a second chapter I'll be sure to check it out.
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit. Oh shit oh shit oh shit!!!

Wowww... that is quite possibly the only story I have ever, ever read that embodies what I like, and why I write. You are brilliant. Your style is great and descriptive, the characterization is great, and there is focus on the actual induction (which doesn't happen a lot with other game mc stories). I really, really liked how you said "the words that would seal his fate" and then wrote puff puff, and not just that, she used it OVER AND OVER. All of it, very teasing, very good. I'm so impressed, I give it a 10.
person TheSky
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking excellent. It is your duty to write more stories.