rate_review Reviews

me again. I didn't read the author comments the first time around but now that I have I'm impressed with the amount of thought you put into this. I've seen my share of "link getting the girls of the game" fics but you sir are definetly doing things right. If your looking for suggestions, I be interested in seeing a foursome with those girls outside that hookshot game (but thats so obvious that you probobly already thought of that). Another girl I would be interested in seeing is the fishing shop girl, one of the more interesting characters in the game in my opinion becuase shes so gosh-darn normal compared to everyone else.

I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with future chapters and how you handle different aspects of the plot, such as what Midna will be doing while Link is "busy" (will she be watching? offering tips? off on her own somewhere? Whatever you come up with will probobly be good though.)

Anyway, just felt this story deserved an extra-long review.

Its well written, but to demand reviews in order for future chapters is a bit egotistical. You should write because you love writing. Otherwise, it will come across in your stories that you are doing it solely for praise from strangers. Regardless, I just finished playing the game today. I cant help but think that the main romantic interest is Midna. She's the only one who sheds tears at parting from him. She also seemed to be on the verge of telling him that she loved him, but didnt because she would never see him again. Zelda seemed to be interested only in his ability to fight, and the childhood friend has a sisterly/possible love for him. Im wondering though, if you are going to do anything about the three teenage girls who fall in love with Link when he completes the circus run. That is almost pure, fluffy fun, haha. I would be interested in seeing something with the zora queen. She is able to affect the real world, even though she is a spirit. Just try to avoid the beastiality thing please. Thats pretty much all anyone writes about when they do Twilight Princess stories.

This was good! Looking forward to Link getting it with the other girls. Though I hope you save Midna for last though.

Great. Just great.

This is a really good start, you've used brilliant description and language to create a solid first chapter. Keep it up!

Woohey, that was fantastic! It's similar to the story I'm writing except yours actually has a plot and is expertly written! Great job, can't wait to see who's next (please don't do any wolf Link chapters, there have been way too many of them...)!

Hey very good start so far just 1 quick question will midna get in on the action sometime during the story? just asking cuz im a huge link midna fan anyway very good start so far keep up the great work.

This is very well writen. It is descriptive, uses symbolism, and proper grammer/spelling. I happen to prefer having romance between Ilia and this Link. I look forward to the next chapters.