rate_review Reviews

It's brilliant that you're back with another superb chapter, I had basically given up hope on this one. Can't wait to see your revisions!

i love how you are writting in the sex scenes and thier relationships instead of just having a pwp.
good job and i hope you update soon.

Very well done, but I don't think of link as such a player... maybe he'll actually fall in love soon and not keep screwing every pretty girl he meets? >.>
5/5 in any case

Pretty good story as of yet.

Not sure about all the OCs, but hey, if anyone can pull it off it's you. It all looks great anyway.

Looks like things are going to get alot more interesting.

Personally, a pairing I've always wanted to see (But can't seem to find anywhere) is Link/Agitha.

Yes, Agitha the Bug Princess. Just food for thought.

Keep up the good work!

I like this story simply because you put some thought into it. It is not a story where Link gang bangs every female (or male) he comes across and I thank you for not doing that. You managed to keep Link in character by keeping him honest and good natured but yet you somehow managed to give Link the personality of a normal 16 or 17 year old that is just human. This is wonderfully well written and a joy to read.

Also I wanted to tell you that I love your author notes at the end. I find myself enjoying reading those just as much as I love the story.

Hey I want to say this is one of the best written stories i have ever read. Not sure weather that tells the absence of my experiences or the profoundness of your writing skills, but I really enjoy reading this. My favorite aspects are the unique relationships and the way the story flows into the game. It is a great story i can't wait to read more. I would consider maybe writing something for retail sale if I were you.

Any chance we could see a lesbian scene with Zelda and Midna? (human form). They really seemed to have something going on in the game.