rate_review Reviews

I really do hope you come back to this fanfic one day! It's one of my favorite on the site, and I regret that I found it long after it went dormant.

This would obviously be for much later in the story, but the great fairy would be a good one. She could hint that passing the cave of ordeals twice has a "special" reward.

Tell me that there's more!? I like the pairings (Link X Beth). Waiting for Midna!! Its not too late is it? Update!!

We wants more! Ok aside from that I like what I am reading. The storyline is special and not the same old crap that most people use. Please keep writing this as I feel this could grow into an awesome idea. Also about the sex... Not bad the partings are nice and believable. Good job on the reasons behind the sex, I don't mind plotless lemons but sometimes it's refreshing to read something with a plot.

Fantastic story, are you still updating?

Very nice! I especially like the incorporation of Oot elements and characters along with a deeper backstory for Link. You do an excellent job of making the sex scenes both highly erotic as well as deeply emotional instead of a random fuck. Though I do wish you had a quicker update frequency but still an amazing story.

I think this is an utterly fantastic story! I am very intrigued both in these scenes, and being the geek i am, about your theories on the Golden Wolf! I only really request that you would please never include an encounter with telma, as i'm pretty sure that some would find it almost frightening :P (Not to mention that she is interested in Renado, ruling Link out.) Also, if you're also using some of the components of OoT, you may want to also consider something with Ruto, as it wouldn't seem right not to include a zora, and the only female zora in TP is kind of dead... :P Or perhaps Ashei, as i think that that would end up being a very adventurous encounter, as she seems to be a very dominant, proud woman

Impressive. Very impressive story. You do good with this and it's great to see such care and effort put into a story. One point of note, during this chapter it states Saria flings her robe away to join Link's clothes but then it says later that she still has it on, might want to fix that.

Anyway, until next time, whenever that may be.

What interesting views. I can honestly belive that the Golden Wolf is not The Hero of Time Link, but will there be subtle clues as to which like he is?

Well, bugger me sideways with a broom handle, you’ve updated with another gorgeously erotic slice of pure brilliance! It’s nice to see the inclusion of some characters from the past (as it were) and a decent, well thought-out storyline to go with the action. There’s certainly nothing there to criticise, so all I can say is that you deserve a nice round of applause for the obvious amount of hard graft that you’ve poured into the story and to carry on with the good work!