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Terribly sorry about not reviewing in such a long time. I've been quite busy, but finally managed to get around to this. Now then, the past few chapters have been getting steadily more graphic. Once again, the wiping aside of these gun soldiers seems just plain pathetic. The best soldiers in the world, killed by a single cyborg? You'd think that with all the advanced technology they have at their disposal, they could easily come up with a weapon that would be effective against Quilla. Oh I know, an EMP rifle, that would disable his elec tronic componenets, leaving him basicly a sitting duck. These kind of weapons already are in developement with your country (I assume you're american) and my country's armed forces. Just think of how much more advanced and well armed an organization such as GUN would be. Well, I know you can't have the soldiers going around over powering one of the main characters. But for god's sake, at least honor the soldiers, make them put in some effort, maybe a few none fatal wounds to Quilla. whatever, it's still a good fic, despite the soldier predicament. I have a question, do you support your government's involvement in the middle east. All Russians supported our troops, but we were in there too long, and we couldn't keep up the pace. We swept them aside, but got bogged down by the unconventional war we were forced into. take a lesson from the Russians, neither of our militarys are made for this kind of war, we both specialize in conventional warfare. Well, this review is getting long enough, I'll continue to follow this fanfiction, and an ARAAT6 would be interesting, how do you plan on topping your previous works. Oh well. This is CrazyIvan, signing off for now...

Finally, I learned how to leave a signed review...hopefully. Anyway, I'm just leaving a second review for in case you would like to talk about my previous review through email.

Nothing bad about it, but nothing really... big, great? No major cliffhanger, not sure what I'm looking forward to in the next chapter, which I disappointingly wait a week for. I'm an impatient bastard. It is nice to see Midnight turn a little more good, maybe he can do something heroic soon, I'm a sucker for anti-heroes.

I always loved this ficseries. I especially like it when someone refers to or incorporates zones from old school Sonic games. That stuff that Tails told Knuckles about Sandopolis is quite interesting.

Also, I know who those two "unnamed" characters were that came to Sonic's party in ARAAT1. They were Bark the Polar Bear and Bean the Dynamite, both from Sonic the Fighter and the comics universe by Archie Comics. The way you incorporated Sally and Elias Acorn in the epilogue of ARAAT4 was also quite a good move, even if it was just a cameo.

If you're interested, maybe you could use Tiara Boobowski as an easter egg. In case you're wondering, Tiara was a deleted character from Sonic Xtreme (which was cancelled altogether), and was supposed to have a similar personality to Sonic. She has a MySpace page, some artwork in the Sonic Xtreme Compendium, and a thread in the Senntient(dot)com forums (under the "Xtreme" archive; change the (dot) to a period to find the forum).

You did quite an excellent job fitting Ashura (another pseudo-canon character) into this ficseries; if you can somehow fit Tiara into this series, I'd appreciate that too (especially if she plays an integral role instead of a cameo).

Amazing.

That was cool. Now I must go my sister gets married in about three hours.

MORE DAMN IT

Heh, great to see Quilla/Midnight. I think I last reviewed under one of my many aliases on ARAAT3. Still reading ^_^

Well, I have to give you guys credit, I'd forgotten Dr. Eggman's ability to create Cyborgs. But I have to wonder if Quilla (easier to type than Midnight)is now a match for one of the 'Ultimates' or if he's still below perfection.

Good chapter. I'm still on the edge of my seat wondering when Mirage is gonna fess up to everything and tell Knux that shes his mother (when she remembers)... and if he'd listen at that.

By the way, try listening to "All You Need Is Love" by the Beatles while reading it. Makes it funny as hell.

most excellent, with some extremley funny and heartfelt moments!