rate_review Reviews

Ah but is Azeroth ready for him. LOL. Lovely ending and a great jumping off point for the new fic. Looking forward to seeing Enoki again.

I was waiting for the truly pissy side of Enoki to pop out, the kind that meant lightning and fire would inherently bend to his will and bitchsmack Jyota.

That last chapter was really good, as much as ive come to love Enoki and Jyota together it seemed to fit.
And your story made me see the flaws in my own relationship, thank you for writting such a wonderful piece of work, im really enjoying the story thus far.

|| Onissa-Chan ||

Lemme start with ...I'm not a huge fan of M/M action but this is ...different to what I normally read. Far more descriptive of the whole rather than the insipid raw steamy man-lovin stuffs ya know?

Aside from the sex...this story has me hooked. Never thought it would, never had an interest but I've bawled my eyes out at Enoki's story, his past, his hopes and heartbreaks. And now his future...oh wow.

Please keep up the good work and update soon and more

so i just re-read this story...and i SERIOUSLY LOVE IT, like i want to marry it and have its babies O_O

amazing amazing amazing! Wow! I'm speechless :) Can't wait to read more

me: we did think you were dead
I: do it again and you WILL suffer
me: dont listen she says that to everyone
I: anyway these chapters amde me laugh
me: and that scene in the officer quarter m-m-m
I: perv
me: talent, good genes and some luck
I: i want next chapter soon
me: so dont die again :D

Fantastic work. Your characters are so very vividly written that it's difficult to not feel their emotions, especially with the mercurial Enoki.

If I may suggest anything, it would be to add a little more setting if you ever rework the beginning of the story. I loved the descriptions of Inali's home, and the belongings you described there made the events that much more real. Your chapter with the Crossroads was perfect, in that you captured the essence of such a busy Horde area (especially before the first expansion...but I digress.) Still, it would be wonderful to hear more about the training tree, Inali's village, and some of Enoki's Tauren friends.

Thanks so much for hours of magnificent reading. I'm looking forward to more!

ooooooh be luvin tis' story a do

Oh how you tease your readers with such delayed yummyness! Well im not one to talk lol. Great chap, good to see Jyota again! Update soon! PLEASE!?!?!?!

~ Anya