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Ooo Jak is being all protective, it's so cute! But what wild imagination he has.

Still no sex for the poor boys but I agree that it can wait. It's more realistic that way. I really think they need to talk more, those two has some serious communication problems. Now I'm really curious about what Daxter has done.

Btw I'll be sending the first part of my story to you very soon. It's pretty lame compared to yours, oh well I did my best. I should have had it done earlier but I guess the holidays got in the way.

Now this...this is comedy GOLD! I believed Daxter to be one of the hardest charachters in a video game to keep in charachter but you made it look so easy to get into his mind! This is a fabulous story! Keep up this incredible work!

Hee hee! X3 This is a great fic. *thumbs-up* I love how you keep Daxter in-character all throughout. And poor Jak. X3

Update, please! =D *gives cookies*

I love this so much! The dialogue is great and I'm glad it's not just stuffed with a lot of angst but actually some sweet lovin between the two of them. JakxDaxter fics are always so angsty which I guess is alright but you need some happy moments too.

"That's not an ottsel noise... that's just a Daxter noise." Haha, I love that line, poor Daxter.

Daxter is kind of like a predator stalking his prey, he sure is dangerous when he is horny. Jak better watch out. ;) I'm looking forward to the next update!

That seemed so much longer than the original. And it was really worth the agonizing wait.

First! I must say that the ending isn't as bad in this version due to the mind-blowing release just moments before. When I was reading Razor's entrance, I was still thinking "Oh.. My God. They are SO cute and awesome and I will NEVER get these images out of my brain."

In fact, with the mind-blowing sexual exploration Jak had gone through plus the fact that he was overwhelmingly amazed that Dax was really going to let them wait a little before going all the way made it make more sense that he actually allowed his friend to be alone with Razor in the first place.

And I loved the way Jak reacted to Dax in the shower. His control went out the window! Where I was dying for it to go all along. I also love the way he embraces Dax after climaxing. (My boyfriend does that to me when I do that to him--just kindof holds me really close and hugs me and rubs my bag lightly).

I wasn't expecting so much from the shower scene but it was AWESOME. Dax really is insatiable, though. You'd think he'd be a little worn out or something after all that, but he seemed ready for intercourse at that point.

Annnnd, yeah. I almost wish I walked in on them (rather than Keira). ;_; What a sight that must have been.

Jak is so cool when he's doing stuff to Dax. He changes from shy and worried to outgoing and like, somehow very open with himself. If he knows he loves seeing Daxter like that so much, I wonder why it's taking so much to chip away at his resolve.

But that's what this fic has been, really. Slow torture. Breaking Jak down until he goes crazy and REALLY takes control and it's awesome and we all read it over and over and over because there's been so much leading up to it that it's that much better when you finally read it.

;_; I really will NEVER think about showers in the same way again.

I wonder how on earth they can sleep in the same bed and still keep their hands relatively to themselves.

And I wonder how much detail Daxter will go into with Razor. >.> He probably won't hold back. Which makes me so curious about chapter ten! ;_; Here we begin our vicious cycle once again (of begging for updates).

I'm so glad that I found this story again, I remember reading the first chapter a really long time ago but then I totally forgot about it. But now I'm here again and had seven new chapters to read, yay! XD It's very good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I will definitely not forget this story again!

Wahhhh!!!!! You are amazing. *I* feel like such a pervert for how much I enjoyed reading that.

Seriously, you worked all of the dirtier points in so seamlessly. I was curious as to how it would be different, and it rocks. Both versions stand so well on their own.

;_; Someday I need to write out some of the horribly perverted yaoi scenarios I've played out in my head, if only to see how it feels to actually see it in writing. I know I'll look at it and think, "I am so going to hell for this."

It's very sexy. Now I'm really REALLY super extra looking forward to the last two chapters. *drools*

YAY!!! Great chap. though I wonder how well Jinx knows about Razers preferences...hmm.. BTW I loved Dax’s “homework” comment, wish I had been given that kind of options for elective courses. DOUBLE YAY!!! For next chapter.

I forgot to mention this in my FanFiction.net review, but one of my favorite lines was when Daxter said to Razer: “So then will ya talk ta me?” It just struck a chord because the title of the whole fic is "Talk to Me," and the line appears right in the dead center of this chapter. I mean, the chapter itself really developed the plot further, and turned the story in a slightly new direction. It's like that line reminded me that the ongoing predicament in this lovable fic is that Jak and Daxter each go to such great lengths to avoid the simplest solution to all of their problems--which would be to talk to one another.

Oh I love it!
This chap. really got me smiling, oh Razor he's so camp.
Jak's homework comment at the end so true!
Go with your dark side and just jump him!
Ah poor Dax he's just in denial, he's so going down... although it would be funny if he was on top lol it would go strait to his head though...
Glad I made your day last time.
Keep up the good work, take your time, its the quality that counts and babe and this is quality.
*hug*
Aino ná
Arowanna