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for Talk to Me

by sillyneko345

person Illyric
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Job, Robin!! Amazing, and don't underestimate yourself! I can hardly believe that was your first sex scene, and if it was? HOLY SHIT!

Nice job! Three thumbs up (don't ask where the third came from...)
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! Finally you updated! I can't wait for the squeal!
person Branny
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! Were is the Final chapter!? It's been months...please tell me you haven't forgotten about the ending!? T____T

This story is too good to just leave there...Please for the love of god finish this amazing story!
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Er, hi. :) I started reading this yesterday and finished it today... and I didn't review because I was being lazy and selfish and wanted to get to the next chapter. XD It was too coo' for me to ignore the little arrow. -.-;;

Speaking of, as it's not finished, I wanna be able to know when it is... just, I'm new to this site, and um. I dunno if there's a little "subscribe to this story" option like there is on FF.net. So, er, how would I know when you've updated it?
person manawolf
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Routed here from jak_smut on Livejournal... it's OFFICIALLY not fair for this not to be finished!!

(btw, the Erol/Razer comment in an earlier chapter made me LOL. They're officially my OTP.)

Everyone's on-character, the smex is VERY hot and god damn you know how to tease. Need moar nao.

My one complaint is that Razer's accent seems to be written as French, when it's clear to me he's supposed to be German. However the voice actor couldn't seem to figure out whether he was British or German, so I know fans get it mixed up a lot. No big deal. ;P
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories. ^_^ It's hilarious and fun. I'm really looking forward to the final chapter is past chapters are any indicator.
person LoveDark
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another magnificent chapter added and even though it seems you didn't plan it the wait was a good supense builder but all the same I can't wait for the chapter ;)
person Kuromei
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for fluff! XD Now I can't wait for the smexy smutiness. X3

And I loved the outtakes. rofl XD
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU UPDATE SOON!!!
person Sione
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, what are you going to do instead, Jak? XD I think Dax is going to enjoy the answer to that question, lol.

*Eagerly awaits the next chapter*