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I love this story and it is a great cliffhanger I already have filthy thought of what might happen and I was disapointed by no details when Zexy was in the shower cos I like lemons and that would have been lemenade that would put me over until the real thing.
You're such a tease! something naughty better happeen soon or you'll see the flamthrower I use on Evil Kairi XD

But if the next part goes romantic I don't want to see angst cos that can put people off stuff so like make Zexion try and kiss Demyx and he misses and makes a show of himself maybe as a good delay if you have to do one

O______O!!!! An Update! Yay! ::Dances::

Ah, well life can get pretty crazy sometimes, so it’s all okay. Ah, it’s just good to know that you’re still working on this. But now, to--Oh, Cookies! ::Munches on a cookies:: Mrpf? ::Swallows bite:: MMmm, okay, I was wondering about the beta-ness. Ah, on the forums here you can go asking for a beta, they even have a board/thread dedicated to it. But now--once again--to read!! . . . .and eat da cookie. XD

::rereads chapters one and two. Starts on chapter 3::

Hmm . . . swiftly in comparison to the other questions? Or swiftly because now they had worked out the appropriate formulas? Granted you did say last time that their teacher had been particularly cruel in her assignment . . . ::Reads::

Poor Zexy, I’m guessing he doesn’t have any kind of video game systems on hand for when Axel and Marluxia visit him . . . if they visit his home . . . ::Everything clicks in head:: Oh. Awww . . . poor Zexion . . . . ::reads on::

XD Yay Dem! Trying to make Zex laugh and feel better. ::Read-le::

::Giggles:: Demy likes shiny things. XD ::Read-read::

Dun-dun-DUUUUUUUUnnnnnn . . . . because everyone’s thinking it. ::Teh readzors::

XXXXXXXXXXXXXDDDDDDDDD Demyx the movie fanatic!!!! And he’s advancing on Zexy like a lynx on a snow-hare!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, that’s just rich . . . ::Reads more::

::Laughing hysterically:: Unified . . . . worse choice. . . . ::Slips back into incoherent laughter as she continues to read::

Oo? Demy swears? . . . I thought he was too bouncy to swear . . . meh ::shrug:: whatever. ::To the reading!::

O.O;;; I feel Zex’s pain . . . . ::Reads the more::

Oh boy, sneaky ninja move to get the DVD into the player w/o the other guy knowing what it is . . . now I really feel sorry for Zexion . . . ::Reads::

OMG . . . . nooooooooooo ::Covers eyes:: that’s exactly how I am!!! ::Rocks back and forth:: Aaaaa . . . I almost don’t want to read anymore ‘cause then I’d have to read more about the movie . . . . aaaa . . . but I like this fic too much and I want to read it . . . . aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . As long as it isn’t something like ‘Bug’, ‘28 Days/Weeks Later’, or any of the newer Zombie Movie remakes I should be okay . . . .::peeks between fingers to continue reading::

Ah . . . it looked like it was really going to happen! . . . But then this would have been waaaaaayy too short a fic. So good save! ::Thumbs up:: And I like Zexy’s mental review. XD ::Goes back to reading::

::Sings:: They’re Pinky, they’re Pinky and the Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain! Dum dee dum dum dum! ::Stops singing:: So Dem’s been under a rock? Or out of the country? Or moving around constantly? Hmmm . . . . he’s a movie fan, but doesn’t know about cartoons . . . ::Ponders more. Reads while pondering::

::Giggles:: Mirror over bed . . . ::Reads on::

XD He’s so trapped. Everything is working completely against him, and in favor of his ‘problem’ . . . and the starring, oh ye gods the starring! It begins . . . . .

Yay! Sooner is appreciated, as is the hint of lemon! . . . Though knowing Zexion’s self-control, that probably won’t happen . . . doesn’t mean that he can’t dry-hump Demy in his sleep, or vice-versa.

Ah, I’ve got to say I love the characterizations for Zexion and Demyx in this. They’re both very clear, and I find myself relating to the pair of them--granted I’m relating a bit more to Zex than Dem, but that’s only because we haven ‘seen’ much of Dem’s life--daily or otherwise. Still this is both very cute and interesting, and I find myself enjoying it immensely.

I wish you luck in keeping up the good work.

-drools at Zexion's movies- Most of ours are bootlegs, 'cuz we're awesome like that, but I'm a documentary /fiend/.
Hooray for an update though! Demyx seems relatively straight, but the horror movie thing was kind of a cop-out me thinks. They totally should have watched "The Omen" (not the new one, the old one), just because that's one of the few movie's I'll watch. Or maybe it was Demyx's sinister plan to watch a cheesy horror film and get cozy with Zexy? Anyway, I await the next chapter good sir!

Well, this is one of the most interesting KH stories that I've read so far (and I've read a lot). I have to admit that I almost died when I ran out of chapters to read. I absolutely adore the pairing. They are so cute together!! And I'm happy that you're able to keep them both in character (I normally stray from that, haha). I've bookmarked the story so I'll be able to quickly check for more.

Hope you update soon.
Cute but Psycho. <3

Cute story ^^ I hope you will update it soon

Aaawwwwwwwwwwwwww . . . . .

Keep this up, it's so cute!

Ah, so Demy has photographic memory? And I loved how you worked in 'Dance, water, dance!' that was silly.

Well, good luck with this!

Oh, this is unspeakably cute! I love how Zexy is starting to learn to let go and open up a little. And you aren't rushing them straight into more than a friendship-type relationship but letting the feelings build slowly, which is very sweet and probably more realistic in that kind of situation.

Great story, I'll be waiting for the next installment!

The second chapter ... is very nice, too ^__^

I like how Zex (ugh, I know, he doesn't like to be called like that) is suddenly finding himself getting friendly with our blonde, hehe. And Dem - so practical ... Love them both!

I will be looking forward to another chappie and thanks for this one!

See you!

teeta

That was good. :) Hope to read more.

Awww that was cute! I anxious for the next chapter!