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for A Heart to Call My Own

by GatorBoy

person Nicole(:
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*smiles giant smile*
You really need to update this fast, cause this is amazing. I love it to death. They are so in character, and this is just... Perfection. (: I love it so much, and you need to write more. Please? :D
person JapAngela
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked what I read so far. But I'm going all emo because there hasn't been an update in forever. T^T
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story sounds awesome. You write brilliantly, lol. the seriousness and humour mixed together are great. cant wait to read the rest!


xXx Haras
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh! Zexy's so sexy! hehe! hmm, wonder what will happen here... >:D
person Cave
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O:

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This story rules. Finally, a high school AU with absolutely fantastic writing! I am absolutely loving the pace of it and the characterization. Zexion is awesome. So is Demyx. O: Go team you!

Sometimes though you use 'the' instead of 'they'. Thought I'd point that out~ Can't wait for the next update! :D
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squeee~ an update!!! I understand about school-induced delays and such... it almost makes it all the sweeter when the update finally happens. Anyway -- the review!

Zexy just needs to have Demyx over a lot so his hosting skills improve ;) Favorite scene was the movie -- I would've pictured Demy as the one who'd be scared of horror flicks and Zexy as the one who'd like them... or at least find them amusing. I was laughing there, it was just too cute!
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter?! *dies of happiness*

The first part of Zexy's dream = rawr! Emus = lol! Darn those pesky emus, always popping up in random bedrooms to ruin the moment.
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!! Zexion is funny i love the side comments be makes!! Cant wait for the next chapter!! XD
person FlurryDivider
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I LOVE IT! Could you email me when you update!? Plz and thx! And I absolutely LOVE this pairing and you can write it well! Keep up the good work!
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was too cute! Ah, I’m so glad that you’re working on this story again. I almost thought I’d have to search out your fic on other fanfic sites. I was even ready to go looking around both DeviantArt and LiveJournal because there they kind of . . . well bluntly, they’re more lax when it comes to imposing rules, and I was beginning to think that your stuff would get purged. But then there’s also Mediaminer, they’ll take any writers, any age, forever and a day as long as they have the right warnings . . . .

But I digress. This is cute, and I almost didn’t believe that you started out with a dream. But I applaud you on keeping them from just ‘falling together’, while still tempting the hell out of Zexy. Ah, and you left off at such an evil place, I wonder if Zex will have a nosebleed by the time we get back . . . or will you pick up right where you left off?

MMM, well keep up with the delicious Zemyx!