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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! (Troll men are my favorite! So sexy!) Please write more!
Mwah!
iley
Mwah!
iley
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your sense of pacing is nice, and the banter between the trolls in the first chapter was amusing. Strong characterizations--you've definately given a complete image of Jaera and Zarang as unique and interesting characters, and their situation is endlessly interesting. Great story, amusing situations in each of your chapters, and the friction and tension is fantastic. Keep up the great work. :)
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want you to know that I've been an AFF lurker for a couple years now, but I finally created an account just to review this piece. You are an amazingly talented writer and I am absolutely desperate for the rest of this story! You make the reader sincerely care about these characters, as though they were people that we knew.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and intriguing beginning and a smooth easy to read writing style. I like your story very much, please do continue :)
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Very very hot, but then I have a thing for the trolls. ^_~ More. You must write more.
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing work. Good job. :] Your story is amazingly well written. I can't wait 'til chapter 4! >:D
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like it. I think trolls and elfs are really good together. Hope you keep up the good work.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very impressive! I love the character interaction in this story, and the way you write is plain and, dare I say, enchanting. You've definately earned an author-fan here.
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I *love* this story, your character chemistry is so well done. I cant wait to see where you go with this, please continue!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Curse you, woman! MOAR NAO! ¢¾