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for Riding Lessons

by Sealink

person jakuro
schedule November 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

excellent smooth and visionary writing!

schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so so so so so happy you finished this story. I like these characters so much.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intense, and wonderful. Thank you for giving them that moment. I hope she will be back near him one day...BTW I should mention I've a thing for trolls
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I remember coming across this story awhile ago and being totally bummed that it appeared to be abandoned. I'm so glad you finished it. I love every chapter but the last one in particular was super hot. I like your writing style - you blend lust and emotion seamlessly and it's really fun to read. Great work.
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Right now I love you a lot. But at the same time I really want to hurt you a little. TEASING BITCH. You knew very well I'd threaten bodily harm when I finished reading this chapter... GODDAMNIT. Still, thank you for the dedication. I love you. But again... better not see your shapely, teasing ass around my neck o' the woods, because I will spank you. Hard.

*wub* =)
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
VERY good! You describe their emotions well - they haven't "done it" yet, and already I'm hot and bothered!

Looking forward the the next (hopefully steamy) chapter!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You do know that it is evil to stop such a good story in its tracks? I dearly hope I will get to read more of this.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update this? I have been waiting patiently for months and months and still nothing. I hope you continue. I was rather enjoying this little ride.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaargh! The sexual tension is going to kill me. I'm going to die. Thanks a lot for writing a story so awesome you are making me tear my hair out here >:(
hehe, but seriously...Please update soon! D:
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic...I really do! Please, PLEASE continue!