rate_review Reviews

Nice! Laura is going commando now. Won't be long before her client decides to get his freak on with her. LOL!

she can't climax - the device? don't forget consistency of narrative. or... remove it.

NIce! Love how that went down. Keep it up!

make the whole thing - ALLL OFF IT! - a dream sequence for the fat fuck. No need to kill him. THIS WOULD HURT MORE.

Always a pleasant surprise to see you back. Hoping for some serious milking soon!

Nice! Laura got tricked and dominated. LOL!

Nice! Lara is in sexual hell. Love it!

Ye Gods, man. That was goddamn brilliant.

I'm doing a more in-depth analysis over on yonder forums, cuz that? That was fucking stunning.

YAY! You updated. A little disturbing, but nothing I can't ignore.

Glad to see you're still writing this - I was getting worried about it, honestly, as this story is one of the things that got me writing here in the first place. Your grasp of psychology and narrative is awesome, and the story you're presenting here is entirely believable in the framework of the mythos. I love it.

So much of what you've written here has just been stunning, overall, and touched upon the darker aspects of the series' potential. You have a way with words, sir, that makes reading your writering an utter delight and I wish we saw your work a little more often because of it.

And as someone I've taken a lot of inspiration from; hey, man, welcome back.