rate_review Reviews

The Pleasure mobile 2.0 was brilliant, especially the AI of her mother. The Bdsm scene and humil was well written and the cliffhanger was enticing.

Awesome! Lara is getting punished for her past deeds. LOL!

MUCH BETTER. No problem with w/ subplots, just move the story forward before you do any more - well done.

Yo 're-title'! Get back on your meds. What part of the contents of this piece did you miss? Do you need a dictionary of porn terms? YES I WILL CALL WHINING BITCHES OUT IN REVIEWS! Like I said before... I, "THE ENORMOUS PRICK", LOVES THIS FIC!

Just call this 'Tomb Raider: The Lara Croft Fuck Doll Chronicles'? Let's be honest, that is what you've written. Where is she in this story? Just does what they say... not a lot of thought went into this beyond style did it? Not much beyond fat fuck needing to be in every scene because you can't write dialogue between her and anyone else, and he is you. Right? Also, get on with the main story so we can get it over before you turn eighty.

WOW! Whats with all the flames? Someone havin' a barbecue roastin' this FAT BASTARD Gordo? Look you put a shit load of work into this pup, and if some whinny 'shall remain 'anon' fuck nuts want to bitch because they didn't get what they wanted... fuck em. There is only one person whose interests matter... see where this is goin?... MINE (an enormous prick) ;) I Love it. I don't get a stiffy visualizing Gordo and her AT ALL. But I admire the fuck out of the art, the writing, and THAT aspect of it kicks much ass. I see a few plot points abandoned (the Russian dude not being w/ her on assignment THAT SUCKS I got a stiffer from that visual in a monsterous way both times... not so much the second - but still better than anything w/ 'G'man) and I don't like the whole ometer thing - I think it would be better, ie more humiliating for her to keep having natural orgasms, w/ these disgusting fucks, do to her humiliating conditioning. Sort of like "We know you ain't fakin' it bitch, and that ain't no tech toy in yer snatch/ass... that is 100% pure rapist. HA!". I was disgusted by the gang rape... as I feel I should be, and confused as to what point it served when she was already bent over for em. Iwas literaly at the point of vomiting at it's pointless excess, but was still impressed by the prose (if that is the proper word). Also... 10" 'spiked dildo?'... hammered? And he and the tech geek weren't kidnapped,(by her or hirelings) gagged, tortured, drugged into giving the password, then kept alive till it was confirmed, then fed their testicals? Then we wouldn't have this opus :) One last thing... DITCH THE FAT FUCK... he's boring, predictable, and keeps me 'humble' if you know what I mean. THAT SAID... AWSOME read.

awsome. See you next year. when the next update comes out

Soooo now we're going back to her being a spineless sex toy of Godo? AND fucked by everybody? so much for plot

put down the hand cream and pick up the adderall.

Nice! Lara has no idea she is going to be taken in her sleep. HA!