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person Anon
schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sailor. Be a good spaz and write your own
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You aren't going to like this ultimatly anyway sailor. You do know she wins in the end right? He isn't writing this for you, or any of the Gordo hating crowd. He has a plan, and it works. Let the man write HIS story... fuck sake you guys are worse than the assholes plauging JustS.
I love the new direction. This is after all a Tomb Raider story. I for one was bored shitless with the fuck doll chronicals
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
MOMMY!!!!! Grow up Sailor. LMAO.
Nice change up. I've read too many spineless Lara rape comics
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad idea. Good chapter
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Like it. He gets to fuck Lara Croft... just like he wanted her. Time to kill Gordo.
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nope. No goading. Just a pity.

A year without an update doesn't bode well for continuation nor would I expect it to continue after such a lapse.

Interests change. As I said, 31 chapters is impressive. It just creates an impression that a broader plan existed.

It's disappointing as a reader who enjoyed the beginning but it's too slow to follow.

And at under five chapters per year and a one year lull, expectations should be low.

But feel free to taunt me about it for saying so.
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...
The old 'Pity. Such dreams left in the dark, forgotten corridors of the dreamers sleep' approach to goading him into updating. Brilliant. Why don't you write em?
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, 31 chapters was a good run and longer than most complete stories.
But there were a lot of 'ideas' that still haven't happened or even been set up.
And those 31 chapters we did get took SEVEN YEARS.
I usually consider a story abandoned after six months.
This is going on a year with no update.
Even IF another chapter or two comes there seems to be no hope of all the scenarios promised.
(Well, not 'promised' but 'described' I suppose.)
Pity.
person BOO YEAHSSSS
schedule April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Faptaculiciousness! And not one ounce of slobber on her - VERY Well described - deliciousness by fat fuck!
TAKE THAT ALL YOU NAY SAYING FUCK NUTS!
NOW, Morbo, my prince, you must PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!! KEEP GOING LIKE 'THIS!'
Just,from here on out, let Gordo shout out "Hello Kitty!" and leave her Croftliciousness to all new groups of debasing degenerate daisey pushers in training.
YOU CAN DO IT!!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wait a minute. Who wrote this last chapter? I have been using this story as literary AMBIEN for months now: the same overdone use of the creativity lulling scene dragging titullar character, and tired time waisting droning on of the o-meter... YAWN!!!! Now? THIS, a story that is entertaining, sexy, believible! See you next month when you'll, no doubt, get bak to refilling my sleep aid prescription - or will you? Good luck.