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June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Interesting way for the antechamber to open. Should be even more interesting what the other two hold.
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June 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Good little filling chapter before more sexual goodness.
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April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're back continuing the story again. And good to see Lara taking control now and then ;)
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April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
She's not being dominated in this chapter vsnake. She's just being fucked and dissapointed. That said Good chapter. Her feeling disapointed takes from her. She may be in charge, but of a situation she has no choice but to be in. Good job.
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April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I want to hate this. I really do. But good writing is good writing. I just ask for a continuation of the continuation of THIS cynergy of
her character, and far less of the assenine overthe top bullshit that has comprised the greater bulk of the chapters. Please enough of the mindless, willess vacous sex toy bullshit. I'm not asking for her to beat the fuckers into submission, just turn more to what you did here; her having to make do with going through hell, and having no choice but make these assholes cum. Enough collars that render blackmail needless. Really, why write another word once it's on?
her character, and far less of the assenine overthe top bullshit that has comprised the greater bulk of the chapters. Please enough of the mindless, willess vacous sex toy bullshit. I'm not asking for her to beat the fuckers into submission, just turn more to what you did here; her having to make do with going through hell, and having no choice but make these assholes cum. Enough collars that render blackmail needless. Really, why write another word once it's on?
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April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Lara is in real trouble now. HA!
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April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Keep going. I like Lara being dominated. Its hot!
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April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You updated.
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April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Don't bother telling him anything resembling praise for this 'new direction'. He's just going back to the mindless fuck toy. He just wants to be loved. You he will ignore. Honest, his own words.
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April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no, please no. I have no problem if you want to back off on the extreme, over the top abuse you have been dishing out; it has gotten rather comic-bookish. But having Lara `take charge' is right out. I want to see her dominated and possessed, not the one on top in any sense. If you are going to go this way you should just end the fic. If you want to dial things back, have some disaster happen which puts Lara into the hands of a new owner. Someone who will use her in more reasonable ways and that way you can dial things back. At this point she has been through so much I actually find her behavior in the last chap pretty unbelievable. But it is not gonna work like this.